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Write about the following topic: Waste disposal has become a major problem in your community. Some people say that the solution is for the government to provide waste bin for every household. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. DO AGREE OR DISAGREE.

: Waste disposal has become a major problem in your community. Some people say that the solution is for the government to provide waste bin for every household. DO AGREE OR DISAGREE. X0qE
The world is going globalization and everyone is trending with it. Traveling abroad for holidays is one of the 21st century trend. some prefer to stay in their country while others prefer to travel abroad. My essay will discuss the benefits of traveling abroad for holidays. Many people travel for holidays for different reasons, with the way the world is trending people will want to learn other people’s culture. For example in the future people in Africa will like to holiday in Asia to learn their culture. i. e their food, language, dressing and all. Such can’t be achieved when you holiday in your own country. Secondly, tourist attraction will be very paramount in the future. A situation where all countries are developed, people will still want to explore all other countries for sight seeing. Country’s can’t be developed with same tourist amenities, so I would say it’s a way of exploring. Conclusively, people will not be limited to holiday in their own country. They will continue to go on holidays and explore different exotic locations.
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some
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country
while others prefer to travel abroad. My essay will discuss the benefits of traveling abroad for holidays.

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different
reasons, with the way the world is trending
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people
will want to learn other
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people’s
culture.
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in the future
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people
in Africa will like to
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holiday
in Asia to learn their culture. i. e their food, language, dressing and all. Such can’t
be achieved
when you
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holiday
in your
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country.

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, tourist attraction will be
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very
paramount in the future. A situation where all
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countries
are developed
,
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people
will
still
want to explore all other
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countries
for sight seeing.
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be developed
with same tourist amenities,
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so
I would say it’s a way of exploring.

Conclusively
,
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people
will not
be limited
to
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holiday
in their
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own
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country
. They will continue to go on
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holidays
and explore
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different
exotic locations.
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IELTS essay : Waste disposal has become a major problem in your community. Some people say that the solution is for the government to provide waste bin for every household. DO AGREE OR DISAGREE.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
176 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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