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Was Slavery the cause of the civil war

Was Slavery the cause of the civil war VwPXJ
The Civil War was an all-consuming event in history. It is the point we choose to divide all of American history. Before the Civil War and after. Our history completely changed because of this one event. I would argue that no other event has had the same effect. The American Civil War began over several different issues including taxes, states rights, and slavery. Neither side was willing to budge on their viewpoint. The tipping point was the election of Abraham Lincoln as President of the United States in 1860. He pledged that the new states would be free states. Almost immediately South Carolina succeeded from the Union and several others soon followed suit. They formed a new nation called the Confederacy which was not recognized as legitimate by the Northern states. The Confederacy believed they had freely joined in the age of forming a new constitution. They believed that the Constitution was an agreement that each state choose to work with each other but they had authority over their own state. The northern states believed that the south had no right to leave the Union and they could use whatever means necessary to recombine all the states into that union. The main fighting happened between 1861 and 1865. The major dividing line occurred between those northern states and the southern states. The northern half argued against slavery and the southern half argued for slavery. Both sides used biblical references to support their perspectives. Religion arguably has been one of the most influential aspects of history, particularly United States History. America was founded on freedom and religion is no different. From the beginning of Jamestown and Plymouth, a group of people were accustomed to being persecuted for their religion. This large group of people then changed and grew with each new immigrant that came from a new country. They became more accepting during the Great Awakening and dissenters. The Great Awakening began in the early 1730s and would inspire new doctrines, theological debates and change the views of African- Americans. Jonathan Edwards was a minister from Massachusetts that shed the rigid academic style of sermon. He preached in a style that targeted the hearts and spirits of souls. Samuel Davies, a Virginian minister, is brought the Great Awakening to the south. He took a special interest in slaves, not only in their spiritual but physical and academic well-being. George Whitefield is one of the most influential Great Awakening ministers. He preached spiritual equality throughout all the colonies. His unique emotional style was particularly captivating to poor whites and slaves. Both of these groups finally began to embrace Christianity. These two groups had not been quite as inspired by Christianity as the other groups. With this newfound sense of freedom and liberty, nothing seemed impossible. The Great Awakening was a moment that changed the United States both spiritually and politically. People were moving throughout the new territories; where they faced many difficult challenges and created new ideas. Many of the ministers of this changing time had a radical message that everyone was equal, all sins were the same so thus in Gods eyes, all people were equal. The Great Awakening was largely a humanitarian movement. It targeted emotions, especially those who had difficult lives. Many ministers spoke directly to the slave community, something rarely done before. Africa is such a large continent, encompassing many countries, tribes, languages, cultures, and religions. Enslaved individuals did not give up their culture but blended it with others and past it onto the next generation. The Great Awakening departed from the strict authoritative style and blended their own unorthodox style into Christianity. Growing Quaker and Anglican denominations became safe- havens for those who disliked the extreme changes and new style but Baptists and Methodists were there to accept the newly converted. Specifically for slaves, the Great Awakening was a time where Christianity showed them a refuge, where they were accepted as humans and they were encouraged to display their feelings and emotions. Now that African- Americans had experienced evangelical religion. Some of them formed bonds with white people and Christ; this would last for many generations. Some African- Americans had learned to read and could read the bible for themselves. All of this arose many questions for the Slaves. These questions were targeted towards white people and they demanded an answer. Many of these questions had been answered before by saying Africans were uneducated, heathen, or savage. What happens when they could read and worshiped God in the same ways as those who enslaved them? Before the Civil War, Slavery was viewed as owning property, just like a cow or horse; unlike today where we view it as a moral issue. The Slave Trade Act put an end to the largest portions of the slave trade in 1807. Although slave trading would continue for many more years, both legally and illegally. People benefited greatly from the millions of people captured and traded. American plantation owners, the Caribbean islands with major sugar productions, slave trades, ship owners, and many more all benefited from the trading and usage of slaves. For a large majority of them it was economic, not moral until the Great Awakening and after the Civil War, some could argue even until the late 1900s. These individuals often used the Bible to justify slavery. The very first justification many people gravitated towards was that they were teaching “the heathens” Christianity so they could be civilized and go to heaven. Many looked no farther than the book of Genesis. In chapter 9, the story of Noah being drunk in a vineyard. He was naked and Ham, his son, saw him. Noah’s other sons also saw him covered him and dressed him without looking. Noah praised his sons Shem and Japheth but cursed Ham for seeing him and not covering him. Hams curse is known as the curse of Cannan. Noah said that Ham and his decedents were to be slaves for all eternity to his brothers and carry a mark of Cain. They stated that since Africans were already slaves, inferior, and had a different skin color then they must be the decedents of Ham. They argued they were destined to remain in slavery. Those who studied the new testament simply argued that the teachings of Jesus never condemned slavery, so it must be within their natural rights. Some argued that not only was is a natural or human right that was permitted by God but slavery was a positive good institution because it exposed them to Christianity so they could become a “civilized” people. This argument lasted until after the Civil Rights Movement and has withstood many counter-arguments. Slaves had a large mix of reactions to religion; they used their own logic, logic forced on them, and often painful personal experiences. Some became atheists because of masters who they witness praying on Sunday but beat them on Monday. Some tried to find a difference in the Christianity they were forced into and the Christianity they had interpreted or seen for themselves. Others found ways to hold onto the African beliefs and mixed them into the traditions and found secret meeting places to worship for themselves. Once they were free from slavery, they were able to form churches of their own displaying a combination of their African heritage and religious beliefs. Fountain in Slavery, Civil War and Salvation attributes the persistence of Christianity among slaves to them making a link to emancipation, particularly during and after the Civil War. Quakers are known as a more peaceful and friendly religious group. They were one of the most prominent of the slave trade during the earliest years of the trade. However, they were also one of the first to leave the slave trade and protest its existence. They began to fight not in Pennsylvania but in the south. Elected officials in Virginia and North Carolina, in particular, made it extremely difficult for Quaker abolitionists to fight against slavery. Quakers and many others have been calling for reforms and protesting since at least 1688. Finally in 1844, after an official petition had been published. Many consider this petition from Germantown was one of the first direct protests of the slave system. Soon many similar protests began to appear throughout North America. Many of these abolitionists paid excessively high costs for their beliefs such as isolation and ostracization, disowned, and even loss of business or life. Quakers ideals to remain peaceful society and the belief that religion and politics should remain in two separate spheres (CHECK FOR QUOTE) often left them out of the major discussions during the 17 and 1800s, politics and war. There was a shift in the mid-1700s to support abolition. This was partly because some of the wealthy, slave owners who were involved in politics had passed away. This shift was mainly due to a new generation who were encouraged as anti-slavery reformers such as John Woolman and Anthony Benezet. Jordan in Slavery and the Meetinghouse does point out that there was a difference in individual conscience and community desire and peace. At some points, he questions the commitment to equality. John Woolman began as a tailor and writer of wills. At a young age, he was asked to create a bill of sale for a female slave. He completed the task but was so troubled by the idea that he became an abolitionist. He began small staying mainly within Pennsylvania and New Jersey but also as far as Rhode Island and North Carolina. He would travel to slave owners in an aim to convince them to free their slaves. He would pay for any hostility from the slave owners, sometimes even paying the slaves himself. Quakers often wore clothes dyed in indigo. Indigo was produced by slave labor. Woolman refused to wear any dyed clothing which made him stand out from most other individuals. (He would typically attend the Philadelphia Yearly Meeting. Abolition was a highly controversial issue here. )Anthony Benezet, a French Huguenot refugee, was a school teacher in Philadelphia. He actually opened the first school for African- American children in Philadelphia. He was an author of several anti-slavery books and correspondent with several prominent influences such as Englands Queen Mother Charlotte and John Wesley. Wesley being a convert to the antislavery cause by Benezet. Benezet also helped found the Pennsylvania Abolition Society, one of the first anti-slavery societies. During the 1758 Yearly meeting decided to rule its members could not buy or sell slaves. They also urged members to visit slave owners and convince them to free their slaves. It is important to note that although the Yearly Meeting made the ruling in 1758 it was not put in effect until 1776. This was just the first steps for the Quakers in the anti-slavery movement. Benezet and Wesley influence the Quakers and Pennsylvania legislature to emancipate, gradually, slaves. Quakers, as a whole, prohibited slave ownership from any of their members in the colonies. Quakers were one of the first groups to accept abolition and were the ones who led not only in politics but by example through the Civil War and Reconstruction.
The
Civil
War
was an all-consuming
event
in
history
. It is the
point
we choose to divide all of American
history
.
Before
the
Civil
War
and after. Our
history
completely
changed
because of this
one
event
. I would argue that no
other
event
has had the same effect. The American
Civil
War
began
over several
different
issues including taxes,
states
rights
, and
slavery
. Neither side was willing to budge on their viewpoint. The tipping
point
was the election of Abraham Lincoln as President of the United
States
in 1860. He pledged that the
new
states
would be
free
states
. Almost immediately South Carolina succeeded from the Union and several others
soon
followed suit. They formed a
new
nation called the Confederacy which was not recognized as legitimate by the Northern
states
. The Confederacy believed they had
freely
joined
in the age of forming a
new
constitution. They believed that the Constitution was an agreement that each
state
choose to work with each
other
but
they had authority over their
own
state
. The northern
states
believed that the south had no
right
to
leave
the
Union and
they could
use
whatever means necessary to recombine all the
states
into that union. The main fighting happened between 1861 and 1865.
The
major dividing line occurred between those northern
states
and the southern
states
.
The
northern half
argued
against
slavery
and the southern half
argued
for
slavery
. Both sides
used
biblical references to support their perspectives.
Religion
arguably
has been one of the most influential aspects of
history
,
particularly
United
States
History
. America
was founded
on freedom and
religion
is no
different
. From the beginning of Jamestown and Plymouth, a
group
of
people
were accustomed
to
being persecuted
for their
religion
. This
large
group
of
people
then
changed
and grew with each
new
immigrant that came from a
new
country. They
became
more accepting during the
Great
Awakening and dissenters. The
Great
Awakening
began
in the early 1730s and would inspire
new
doctrines, theological debates and
change
the views of African- Americans. Jonathan Edwards was a
minister
from Massachusetts that shed the rigid academic
style
of sermon. He preached in a
style
that targeted the hearts and spirits of souls. Samuel Davies, a Virginian
minister
,
is brought
the
Great
Awakening to the south. He took a special interest in
slaves
, not
only
in their spiritual
but
physical and academic well-being. George Whitefield is one of the most influential
Great
Awakening
ministers
. He preached spiritual equality throughout all the colonies. His unique emotional
style
was
particularly
captivating to poor whites and
slaves
. Both of these
groups
finally
began
to embrace Christianity. These two
groups
had not been quite as inspired by Christianity as the
other
groups
. With this newfound sense of freedom and liberty, nothing seemed impossible. The
Great
Awakening was a moment that
changed
the United
States
both
spiritually
and
politically
.
People
were moving throughout the
new
territories; where they faced
many
difficult challenges and created
new
ideas
.
Many
of the
ministers
of this changing time had a radical message that everyone was equal, all sins were the same
so
thus
in Gods eyes, all
people
were equal. The
Great
Awakening was
largely
a humanitarian movement. It targeted emotions,
especially
those
who
had difficult
lives
.
Many
ministers
spoke
directly
to the
slave
community, something rarely done
before
. Africa is such a
large
continent, encompassing
many
countries, tribes, languages, cultures, and
religions
. Enslaved
individuals
did not give up their culture
but
blended it with others and past it onto the
next
generation. The
Great
Awakening departed from the strict authoritative
style
and blended their
own
unorthodox
style
into Christianity. Growing
Quaker
and Anglican denominations
became
safe- havens for those
who
disliked the extreme
changes
and
new
style
but
Baptists and Methodists were there to accept the
newly
converted.
Specifically
for
slaves
, the
Great
Awakening was a
time where
Christianity
showed
them a refuge, where they were
accepted
as
humans and
they
were encouraged
to display their feelings and emotions.
Now
that African- Americans had experienced evangelical
religion
.
Some
of them formed bonds with white
people
and Christ; this would last for
many
generations.
Some
African- Americans had learned to read and could read the bible for themselves. All of this arose
many
questions
for the
Slaves
. These
questions
were targeted
towards white
people and
they demanded an answer.
Many
of these
questions
had
been answered
before
by saying Africans
were uneducated
, heathen, or savage. What happens when they could read and worshiped God in the same ways as those
who
enslaved them?
Before
the
Civil
War
,
Slavery
was viewed
as owning property,
just
like a cow or horse; unlike
today
where we view it as a moral issue. The
Slave
Trade
Act put an
end
to the largest portions of the
slave
trade
in 1807. Although
slave
trading would continue for
many
more years, both
legally
and
illegally
.
People
benefited
greatly
from the millions of
people
captured and traded. American plantation
owners
, the Caribbean islands with major sugar productions,
slave
trades
, ship
owners
, and
many
more all benefited from the trading and usage of
slaves
. For a
large
majority of them it was economic, not moral until the
Great
Awakening and after the
Civil
War
,
some
could argue even until the late 1900s. These
individuals
often
used
the Bible to justify
slavery
. The
very
first
justification
many
people
gravitated towards was that they were teaching “the heathens” Christianity
so
they could
be civilized
and go to heaven.
Many
looked no farther than the
book of Genesis
. In chapter 9, the story of Noah
being drunk
in a vineyard. He
was naked
and
Ham
, his son,
saw
him. Noah’s
other
sons
also
saw
him covered him and dressed him without looking. Noah praised his sons
Shem
and
Japheth
but
cursed
Ham
for seeing him and not covering him.
Hams
curse
is known
as the curse of
Cannan
. Noah said that
Ham
and his decedents were to be
slaves
for all eternity to his brothers and carry a mark of Cain. They stated that since Africans were already
slaves
, inferior, and had a
different
skin color then they
must
be the decedents of
Ham
. They
argued
they
were destined
to remain in
slavery
. Those
who
studied the
new testament
simply
argued
that the teachings of Jesus never condemned
slavery
,
so
it
must
be within their natural
rights
.
Some
argued
that not
only
was is a natural or human
right
that
was permitted
by God
but
slavery
was a
positive
good
institution
because
it exposed them to Christianity
so
they could become a “civilized”
people
. This argument lasted until after the
Civil
Rights
Movement and has withstood
many
counter-arguments.
Slaves
had a
large
mix of reactions to
religion
; they
used
their
own
logic, logic forced on them, and
often
painful personal experiences.
Some
became
atheists
because
of masters
who
they witness praying on Sunday
but
beat them on Monday.
Some
tried to find a difference in the Christianity they
were forced
into and the Christianity they had interpreted or
seen
for themselves. Others found ways to hold onto the African
beliefs
and mixed them into the traditions and found secret
meeting
places to worship for themselves. Once they were
free
from
slavery
, they were able to form churches of their
own
displaying a combination of their African heritage and religious
beliefs
. Fountain in
Slavery
,
Civil
War
and Salvation attributes the persistence of Christianity among
slaves
to them making a link to emancipation,
particularly
during and after the
Civil
War
.
Quakers
are known
as a more peaceful and friendly religious
group
. They were one of the most prominent of the
slave
trade
during the earliest years of the
trade
.
However
, they were
also
one of the
first
to
leave
the
slave
trade
and protest its existence. They
began
to fight not in Pennsylvania
but
in the south. Elected officials in Virginia and North Carolina,
in particular
, made it
extremely
difficult for
Quaker
abolitionists to fight against
slavery
.
Quakers
and
many
others have been calling for reforms and protesting since at least 1688.
Finally
in 1844, after an official petition had
been published
.
Many
consider this petition from Germantown was one of the
first
direct protests of the
slave
system.
Soon
many
similar protests
began
to appear throughout North America.
Many
of these abolitionists paid
excessively
high costs for their
beliefs
such as isolation and ostracization, disowned, and even loss of business or life.
Quakers
ideals to remain peaceful society and the
belief
that
religion
and
politics
should remain in two separate spheres (
CHECK
FOR QUOTE)
often
left
them out of the major discussions during the 17 and 1800s,
politics
and
war
. There was a shift in the mid-1700s to support
abolition
. This was partly
because
some of the
wealthy,
slave
owners
who
were involved
in
politics
had passed away. This shift was
mainly
due to a
new
generation
who
were encouraged
as anti-slavery reformers such as John
Woolman
and Anthony
Benezet
. Jordan in
Slavery
and the Meetinghouse does
point
out that there was a difference in
individual
conscience and community desire and peace. At
some
points
, he
questions
the commitment to equality. John
Woolman
began
as a tailor and writer of wills. At a young age, he
was asked
to create a bill of sale for a female
slave
. He completed the task
but
was
so
troubled by the
idea
that he
became
an abolitionist. He
began
small
staying
mainly
within Pennsylvania and
New
Jersey
but
also
as far as Rhode Island and North Carolina.
He
would travel to
slave
owners
in an aim to convince them to
free
their
slaves
.
He
would pay for any hostility from the
slave
owners
,
sometimes
even paying the
slaves
himself.
Quakers
often
wore clothes dyed in indigo. Indigo
was produced
by
slave
labor.
Woolman
refused to wear any dyed clothing which made him stand out from most
other
individuals
. (He would
typically
attend the Philadelphia Yearly
Meeting
.
Abolition
was a
highly
controversial issue here.
)
Anthony
Benezet
, a French Huguenot refugee, was a school teacher in Philadelphia. He actually opened the
first
school for African- American children in Philadelphia. He was an author of several anti-slavery books and correspondent with several prominent influences such as
Englands
Queen Mother Charlotte and John Wesley. Wesley being a convert to the antislavery cause by
Benezet
.
Benezet
also
helped
found the Pennsylvania
Abolition
Society, one of the
first
anti-slavery societies. During the 1758 Yearly
meeting
decided to
rule
its members could not
buy
or sell
slaves
. They
also
urged members to visit
slave
owners
and convince them to
free
their
slaves
. It is
important
to note that although the Yearly
Meeting
made the ruling in 1758 it was not put in effect until 1776. This was
just
the
first
steps for the
Quakers
in the anti-slavery movement.
Benezet
and Wesley influence the
Quakers
and Pennsylvania legislature to emancipate,
gradually
,
slaves
.
Quakers
, as a whole, prohibited
slave
ownership from any of their members in the colonies.
Quakers
were one of the
first
groups
to accept
abolition
and were the ones
who
led not
only
in
politics
but
by example through the
Civil
War
and Reconstruction.
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