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In this contemporary world, it is undeniable that the internet is the great invention of human society. As a result, some people assert that it is the most important invention in the modern world. Personally, I indubitably disagree for various reasons. In this essay I will have a diputable discussion related to this agrument.

In this contemporary world, it is undeniable that the internet is the great invention of human society. As a result, some people assert that it is the most important invention in the modern world. Personally, I indubitably disagree for various reasons. In this essay I will have a diputable discussion related to this agrument. bx3RX
In this contemporary world, it is undeniable that the internet is the great invention of human society. As a result, some people assert that it is the most important invention in the modern world. Personally, I indubitably disagree for various reasons. In this essay I will have a diputable discussion related to this agrument. Technological advancements have changed not only our society but the world. To be more specific, technology devices are deeply infiltrated into people’s lives and play an essential part in it. Moreover, thanks to the development of the internet in the last two decades, people have been able to connect with each other immediately, thus boosting economic growth tremendously. Additionally, in the last 2 years, because of the appearance of the Covic 19 epidemic, this again highlights the gravity of the internet, which allows people to work and study from the long distances, therefore avoiding economic stagnation and public ignorance in society However, if people believe the internet is the most important invention, comparing it to other inventions such as transportation, elections, and artificial intelligence is not fair. Meanwhile, these inventions have made significant contributions to the well-being of our society, owing to the fact that transportation aids in the unification of communities and the flow of commodities. Last but not least, electronic devices allow people to use various helpful gadgets in their houses, which reduces the time needed to do house chores, so people can utilize that time to do other important tasks. Moreover, the combination of electronic and high technology directly increases the manufacturing process, thus avoiding time-consuming and reducing the investment in produre. In conclusion, taking all into consideration, whether the internet is the most important invention or not is still a controversial issue. I hold firm belive that out there are still innumerable invetions that extremely essential in human life.
In this contemporary world, it is undeniable that the internet is the great invention of human society.
As a result
,
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some
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people
assert that it is the most
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important
invention in the modern world.
Personally
, I
indubitably
disagree for various reasons. In this essay I will have a
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diputable
discussion related to this
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agrument
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Technological advancements have
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only
our society
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the world. To be more specific, technology devices are
deeply
infiltrated into
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people’s
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lives
and play an essential part in it.
Moreover
, thanks to the development of the internet in the last two decades,
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people
have been able to connect with each other immediately,
thus
boosting economic growth
tremendously
.
Additionally
, in the last 2 years,
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because
of the appearance of the
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Covic
19 epidemic, this again highlights the gravity of the internet, which
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allows
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people
to work and study from the long distances,
therefore
avoiding economic stagnation and public ignorance in society

However
, if
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people
believe the internet is the most
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important
invention, comparing it to other inventions such as transportation, elections, and artificial intelligence is not
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fair
. Meanwhile, these inventions have made significant contributions to the well-being of our society, owing to the fact that transportation aids in the unification of communities and the flow of commodities. Last
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but
not least, electronic devices
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allow
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people
to
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use
various helpful gadgets in their
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houses
, which
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reduces
the time needed to do
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house
chores,
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so
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people
can utilize that time to do other
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important
tasks.
Moreover
, the combination of electronic and high technology
directly
increases the manufacturing process,
thus
avoiding time-consuming and reducing the investment in
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produre
.

In conclusion
, taking all into consideration, whether the internet is the most
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important
invention or not is
still
a controversial issue. I hold firm
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belive
that out there are
still
innumerable
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invetions
that
extremely
essential in human life.
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IELTS essay In this contemporary world, it is undeniable that the internet is the great invention of human society. As a result, some people assert that it is the most important invention in the modern world. Personally, I indubitably disagree for various reasons. In this essay I will have a diputable discussion related to this agrument.

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