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Volunteering and charity are the same

Volunteering and charity are the same Dw7Op
1) Volunteering and charity are the same, both come from their free will. Volunteering is broader, available in all fields, volunteers often follow organizations For example, volunteering to teach poor children, bringing old women across the street Charity is a material contribution to help those in difficult circumstances, without an organization eg: giving rice, books 3) Every year, I always donate clothes and books to poor children in remote areas. These are small things, but they still help them somewhat. I am happy to be able to help them when they are in trouble.
1) Volunteering and charity are the same, both
come
from their free will.

Volunteering is broader, available in all fields, volunteers
often
follow organizations

For example
, volunteering to teach poor children, bringing
old
women across the street

Charity is a material contribution to
help
those in difficult circumstances, without an organization

eg
: giving rice, books

3) Every year, I always donate clothes and books to poor children in remote areas. These are
small
things,
but
they
still
help
them somewhat. I am happy to be able to
help
them when they are in trouble.
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IELTS essay Volunteering and charity are the same

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
94 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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