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Hello World Fundamentals

Hello World Fundamentals 2R93J
Of late, many developed countries have large number of people over the age 65, this been a prevailing cause in large significant part of the world the sea change has been witnessed in economical decrement for any of country. The following paragraph would elucidate the cause of the reason and propose a handful of measure. In commence of the reason, first and foremost is, it blend the economy of any country which adversely affect the populations? ease of living. In any country the aged person, being asset for the country will not contribute to country's economy. Moreover If the number of aged increased the liable people have to give handsome amount of time for their care and caustions. Along with this they may require entire day caretaker which also become unproductive for country economy. For instance, If a family with husband and wife with two children and their parents, the head of the family have juve his time for their health behaviour Although every problem has solution as wery lock hat key. It depends how we act. In the family to aged people are most respectful. As they have acknowledge of many things due to there experience and long struggle, they shed light on younger one's about the decision as they stepped wrong in their past life. Moreover, as the superior of family goes to work grand childrens and dependent on their grand parents, which give time to liable person to have his work with more ease. In conclusion, I want to add that age is just a number, many people with 65 or more are working and are economical to their country. In addition people who are daily with their exercise and healthy home will always be young beside whatever the no. front of their they have in age column.
Of late,
many
developed
countries
have large number of
people
over the age 65, this been a prevailing cause in large significant part of the world the sea
change
has
been witnessed
in economical decrement for any of
country
. The following paragraph would elucidate the cause of the reason and propose a handful of measure. In commence of the reason,
first
and foremost is, it
blend
the economy of any
country
which
adversely
affect the populations?
ease
of living. In any
country
the aged person, being asset for the
country
will not contribute to country's economy.
Moreover
If the number of aged increased the liable
people
have to
give handsome amount of time for their care and
caustions
. Along with this they may require entire day caretaker which
also
become unproductive for
country
economy.
For instance
, If a
family
with husband and wife with two children and their parents, the head of the
family
have
juve
his time for their health
behaviour
Although every problem has solution as
wery
lock hat key. It
depends
how we act. In the
family
to aged
people
are most respectful. As they have
acknowledge
of
many
things due to there experience and long struggle, they shed light on younger one's about the decision as they stepped
wrong
in their past life.
Moreover
, as the superior of
family
goes to work grand
childrens
and dependent on their grand parents, which give time to liable person to have his work with more
ease
.
In conclusion
, I want to
add
that age is
just
a number,
many
people
with 65 or more are working and are economical to their
country
. In
addition
people
who are daily with their exercise and healthy home will always be young beside whatever the no. front of their they have in age column.
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IELTS essay Hello World Fundamentals

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301 words
5.5
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