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visted to park with my family

visted to park with my family 2raej

i wake up early in the morning but when i saw the clock. it has 3 'o clock. i thought still have enough time for namaz and azan. i fell asleep again. then when i wake up 11'o clock. today is Sunday that's why i fell asleep till 11'o clock. then i prepared a breakfast for myself. after that i had a breakfast with having tea. then, i offered prayer and start to doing my ilets preparation have felt some craving then i made cold coffee. cold coffee was yummy and i enjoyed a lot its taste. then i had received my sisters call. she offered me to go to lake city. i agreed and i am ready for outing. when i going to lake city park with my sister and nephew. where i enjoyed with both f them but its hot today. i have no stamina to bear hot weather that's why i have felt fluctuation in my mood.

Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 wake up early in the morning This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 when Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalarmtimer
clock
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
 has 3 'o You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalarmtimer
clock
. Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
still
 have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 time for Possible spelling mistake found.namenamednamesnavalNASAnasal
namaz
 and Possible spelling mistake found.AlanKazanAANAZAAZNAdan
azan
. Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 fell asleep again. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThen
then
 when Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 wake up 11'o You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalarmtimer
clock
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterToday
today
 is Sunday that's why Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 fell asleep till 11'o You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalarmtimer
clock
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThen
then
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 prepared a breakfast for myself. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAfter
after
 that Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: "had breakfast".had breakfast
had a breakfast
 with having tea. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThen
then
, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 offered prayer and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 to doing my Possible spelling mistake found.letsisletsinletsi lets
ilets
 preparation have felt This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 craving then Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 made This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 coffee. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCold
cold
 coffee was yummy and Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 enjoyed a lot its taste. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThen
then
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 had received my sisters call. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterShe
she
 offered me to go to lake city. Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesced
agreed
 and Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am ready for outing. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhen
when
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 going to lake city park with my sister and nephew. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhere
where
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 enjoyed with both f them This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 its hot This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
. Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 have no stamina to bear hot weather that's why Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 have felt fluctuation in my mood. 