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Vietnamese traditional clothing

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Ao dai is the traditional costume of vienamese women. It often symbolizes Vietnam's national identity and culture. The Ao dai made of either cotton and silk. It has to pieces on the front and the back which go together with long big pants. Ao dai has many different versions for each occasion such as at high school, they wear white Ao dai with white pants; in some traditional events, people will wear colorful pieces; at the wedding, bride and groom wearing red or yellow Ao dai with the embroidered details of flowers and dragons to be lucky. Ao Dai is proud to be an object that represents the soul and beauty of Vietnam.
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is the traditional costume of
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women. It
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symbolizes Vietnam's national identity and culture. The
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made of either cotton and silk. It
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pieces on the front and the back which go together with long
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pants.
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has
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versions for each occasion such as at high school, they wear white
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with white pants; in
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traditional
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,
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will wear colorful pieces; at the wedding, bride and groom wearing red or yellow
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with the embroidered
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of flowers and dragons to be lucky.
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is proud to be an object that represents the soul and beauty of Vietnam.
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IELTS essay Vietnamese traditional clothing

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