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Video games have negative effect on children. Do you agree or disagree?

Video games have negative effect on children. XVXYN

These days most of the children are playing video games which have some negative effects on them. On the one hand, it has an impact on their behavior and thoughts, what is clear is that many video games involve violence actions and they don’t have any rule for punishing the person which is not acceptable in real life, so that children who cannot recognizes bad things and good things, might not considered it as a bad thing.

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