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Vegetables are good for our health

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Vegetables are very important for our health. Eating vegetables keeps both bodies and minds healthy. Green vegetables have a great contribution to a balanced diet. Green vegetables contain many types of vitamins and minerals. Some vegetables we cook and some we eat them by making a raw salad. Spinach, beans, peas, tomatoes, carrots, etc. , are green vegetables. There are more than 80 types of vegetables all over the world. It is most important to have green vegetables in our food. Doctors advise us to eat green vegetables. Eating green vegetables increases the immunity of our body.
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IELTS essay Vegetables are good for our health

Essay
  American English
10 paragraphs
97 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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