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Using the example of the urn plant, explain how epiphytes have adapted to life in the rain forest. v.1

Using the example of the urn plant, explain how epiphytes have adapted to life in the rain forest. v. 1
It takes years to be an exceptional teacher, who can teach students without any hesitation and full of energy. I partially concur with the viewpoint that only a trained tutor can teach efficiently. In contrast, I believe even on the job training can be equally helpful. This essay will demonstrate that, although it is essential to enrol in a vocational teaching course to be designated as a teacher, but other traits such as higher education and soft skills must not be ignored while choosing a teacher. It is irrefutable to say that a basic training module is necessary to inculcate teaching traits in an individual. It will not only help in understanding the teaching methods, but also imparts the adequate knowledge required. In addition to this, a trained teacher can maintain discipline in the classroom, even in the beginning of one's career, which is extremely challenging for an untrained person. As per the survey conducted by 'The Tribune' in December 2018, it is revealed that 7 out of 10 teachers, who cleared the 'Elementry Teachers Training' course, are more competent than others. However, a few individuals say that the most significant consideration to be a teacher is not undergoing a training, but having dedication, motivation and desire to become one. If a person continues to put in additional efforts during his teaching time, then he will be a renowned teacher one day. Hence, completing training merely is not the criteria to be qualified as an adorable teacher. To cite an instance, lots of individuals without any training course in teaching were hired by the government of India in the last year on a temporary basis, but they are now confirmed as permanent as they exhibited exceptional teaching skills. In conclusion, teaching course definitely helps in understanding the fundamental concepts of education, but other traits should also be considered while selecting a teacher.
It takes years to be an exceptional
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teacher
, who can teach students without any hesitation and full of energy. I
partially
concur with the viewpoint that
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only
a trained tutor can teach
efficiently
.
In contrast
, I believe even on the job
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training
can be
equally
helpful. This essay will demonstrate that, although it is essential to enrol in a vocational
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teaching
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course
to
be designated
as a
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teacher
,
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but
other traits such as higher education and soft
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skills
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must
not be
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ignored
while choosing a teacher.

It is irrefutable to say that a basic
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training
module is necessary to inculcate
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teaching
traits in an individual. It will not
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only
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help
in understanding the
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teaching
methods,
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but
also
imparts the adequate knowledge required.
In addition
to this, a trained
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teacher
can maintain discipline in the classroom, even in the beginning of one's career, which is
extremely
challenging for an untrained person. As per the survey conducted by 'The Tribune' in December 2018, it
is revealed
that 7 out of 10
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teachers
, who cleared the '
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Elementry
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Teachers
Training'
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course
, are more competent than others.

However
, a few individuals say that the most significant consideration to be a
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teacher
is not undergoing a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
training
,
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but
having dedication, motivation and desire to become one. If a person continues to put in additional efforts during his
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teaching
time, then he will be a renowned
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teacher
one day.
Hence
, completing
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training
merely
is not the criteria to
be qualified
as an adorable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teacher
. To cite an instance, lots of individuals without any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
training
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course
in
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teaching
were hired
by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
of India in the last year on a temporary basis,
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but
they are
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now
confirmed as permanent as they exhibited exceptional
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teaching
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
.

In conclusion
,
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teaching
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course
definitely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
in understanding the fundamental concepts of education,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
other traits should
also
be considered
while selecting a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teacher
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Using the example of the urn plant, explain how epiphytes have adapted to life in the rain forest. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
312 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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