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using ethanol instead of gasoline

using ethanol instead of gasoline m15mr
The reading and the listening are about using ethanol instead of gasoline. While the author calims that ethanol is not a good replacement for gasoline, the professor refutes all the claims made my the listening and states that ethanol can be a good alternative to gasoline. First, the speaker contends that ethanol could not solve the problem of global warming. On the contrary, the lecturer opposes this and mentions that ethanol could not add to global warming. The professor explaines that ethanol is made from plants, such as corns; so people should grow plant in order to produce ethanol. The lecturer points out that growing plants could absord carbon dioxide from the air and reduce global warming. Second, the reading states that using ethanol could reduce the amount of plants available as animals' nutrients. On the other hand, the listening contradicts this and says that cellulose is the main part of the plant that should be used to produce ethanol. The professor mentions that cellulose finds only on the cell wall, which is in the part of plants that do not be eaten by animals. As a result, the lecturer adds that using plants to produce ethanol will not diminsh the amount of food for animals. Third, the writer claims that ethanol could not compete with gasoline in the term of price. Conversely, the lecturer refutes this and posits that ethanol could compete with gasoline in the future. The professor exaplains that if people start to buy ethanol, its production will increase, which could drop its price. The speaker mentions that there is a statistic done found that if the production of ethanol is three time greater than today, the cost of ethanol production will drop by forty percent.
The reading and the listening are about using
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ethanol
instead
of
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gasoline
. While the author
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calims
that
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ethanol
is not a
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good
replacement for
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gasoline
, the
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professor
refutes all the claims made my the listening and states that
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ethanol
can be a
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good
alternative to gasoline.

First
, the speaker contends that
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ethanol
could not solve the problem of global warming.
On the contrary
, the
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lecturer
opposes this and mentions that
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ethanol
could not
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add
to global warming. The
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professor
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explaines
that
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ethanol
is made
from
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plants
, such as corns;
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so
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people
should grow
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plant
in order to produce
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ethanol
. The
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lecturer
points out that growing
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plants
could
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absord
carbon dioxide from the air and
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reduce
global warming.

Second, the reading states that using
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ethanol
could
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reduce
the amount of
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plants
available as animals' nutrients.
On the other hand
, the listening contradicts this and says that cellulose is the main part of the
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plant
that should be
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used
to produce
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ethanol
. The
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professor
mentions that cellulose finds
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
on the cell wall, which is in the part of
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plants
that do not
be eaten
by animals.
As a result
, the
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lecturer
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adds
that using
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plants
to produce
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ethanol
will not
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diminsh
the amount of food for animals.

Third, the writer claims that
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ethanol
could not compete with
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gasoline
in the term of price.
Conversely
, the
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lecturer
refutes this and posits that
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ethanol
could compete with
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gasoline
in the future. The
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professor
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exaplains
that if
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people
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start
to
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buy
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ethanol
, its production will increase, which could drop its price. The speaker mentions that there is a statistic done found that if the production of
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ethanol
is three time greater than
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today
, the cost of
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ethanol
production will drop by forty percent.
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IELTS essay using ethanol instead of gasoline

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
289 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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