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using a bicycles in the city

using a bicycles in the city 2xoY6
People should ride bicycles in city for a couple of reasons. First of all, most cyclists have better health than normal people. For instance, research shows that cycling is good for heart, lowers blood pressure, and helps lose weighT. Furthermore, biking saves your money. For example, in the US, every year citizens spend thousands of dollars on gasoline, motor oil, maintenance, insurance, but bicycles just costS $60-200.
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should ride bicycles in city for a couple of reasons.
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, most cyclists have better health than normal
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bicycles
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IELTS essay using a bicycles in the city

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
67 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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