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alternative energy/ fossil fuels

alternative energy/ fossil fuels per2a
TS1: on the one hand, there are a couple of advantages to alternative energy. First, renewable power is infinite as it is renewed on a daily basis. Take solar energy for example, it is harnessed whenever the sun comes out while it takes fossil fuels years to be formed…. In addition, renewable power is environmentally-friendly. For example, solar energy release no CO2 but when fossil fuels are burned, they emit large amounts of co2, a greenhouse gas into the air TS2: on the other hand, it is important to point out the merits of fossil fuels. First of all, fossil fuels are relatively cheap. For instance, there is infrastructureUC such as power plants, gas stations, oil refineries already in place so it’s easy to find and produce these fuels. However, the expensive investment in solar panels, and nuclear plants can delay the use of these fuels. Second, fossil fuels have stable energy output. For example, some non-renewable power such as coal, natural gas, crude oil, petroleum products are not depend on weather conditions like solar energy or wind energy.
TS1: on the one hand, there are a couple of advantages to alternative
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energy
.
First
, renewable
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power
is infinite as it
is renewed
on a daily basis. Take
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solar
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energy
for example
, it
is harnessed
whenever the sun
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comes
out while it takes
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fossil
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fuels
years to
be formed
….
In addition
, renewable
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power
is
environmentally
-friendly.
For example
,
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solar
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energy
release no CO2
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but
when
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fossil
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fuels
are burned
, they emit large amounts of co2, a greenhouse gas into the
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air


TS2:
on the other hand
, it is
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important
to point out the merits of
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fossil
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fuels
.
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First of all
,
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fossil
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fuels
are
relatively
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cheap
.
For instance
, there is
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infrastructureUC
such as
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power
plants, gas stations, oil refineries already in place
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so
it’s easy to find and produce these
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fuels
.
However
, the expensive investment in
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solar
panels, and nuclear plants can delay the
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use
of these
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fuels
. Second,
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fossil
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fuels
have stable
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energy
output.
For example
,
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some
non-renewable
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power
such as coal, natural gas, crude oil, petroleum products are not
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depend
on weather conditions like
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solar
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energy
or wind
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energy
.

IELTS essay alternative energy/ fossil fuels

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
179 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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