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easy and difficult hobbies

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On the one hand, there are a couple of advantages to easy hobbies. First, normal pursuits can OFFER PHYSICAL RELAXATION and do non-exercise activities after work. For example, yoga PLAYERS can improve strength and relax after a stressful day without doing strenuous activities. Furthermore, easy hobbies are also low-cost. For instance, an activity THAT requires no equIPMENT such as READING IS MORE simple and inexpensive than GOLFING On the OTHER hand, it is important to point out the merits of hard hobbies. First of all, difficult hobbies have a higher level of satisfaction. For example, adventure games can bring a sense of achievement when people conquer challenges and succeed. In addition, hard hobbies are suitable for thrill seekers who want to challenge themselves. For instance, some hobbies such as climbing, bungee jumping are stimulating for risk takers and motivating THEM to push THEIR limits.

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