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Spending money for searching the teacher is said to have the best way, whilst other believe the due to having limited money this amount should be spent on equipment. This essay not only discuss both views but also my personal view will be given in the conclusion. The prominent reason why some people of opine that utilization of money should be on teacher. It gives theoritical knowledge to pupils. In other words, if school spend large amount to search tutors, then there would be more chance to interact between staff and students because teacher know very well about students whether this work would be suitable for them or not. Thus, by having intensive knowledgeable teacher they are more likely to get experience by physical touch regardless of caring about any hurdles. For example, in shrigangr, which is well Known for teaching style is spending money on better staff in every school that is reason behind that their way to teaching is unlike from others. Other hand, spending on equipment is Worthy source to get knowledge. It offers convenient source and interesting method as well. To elaborate it, owing to having technical era everyone wants to complete their work by easy way without doing hard work. Therefore, it is a brilliant way for finishing their task with enthusiastic way. For instance, history, which is compulsory subject in my country requires too much visualization in order to remember for longer time. By watching computer they can observe picture where they are more likely to capture in their own mind. To conclude, although money should be utilized on teacher who offer better environment to school, I convict that equipment are also necessary to make interest about study there should be equal participation by school.
Spending
money
for searching the
teacher
is said
to have the best way, whilst other believe the due to having limited
money
this amount should
be spent
on equipment. This essay not
only
discuss both views
but
also
my personal view will be
given
in the conclusion.

The prominent reason why
some
people
of opine that utilization of
money
should be on
teacher
. It gives
theoritical
knowledge to pupils.
In other words
, if
school
spend large amount to search tutors, then there would be more chance to interact between staff and students
because
teacher
know
very
well about students whether this work would be suitable for them or not.
Thus
, by having intensive knowledgeable
teacher
they are more likely to
get
experience by physical touch regardless of caring about any hurdles.
For example
, in
shrigangr
, which is well Known for teaching style is spending
money
on better staff in every
school
that is
reason behind that their way to teaching is unlike from others.

Other hand, spending on equipment is Worthy source to
get
knowledge. It offers convenient source and interesting method
as well
. To elaborate it, owing to having technical era everyone wants to complete their work by easy way without doing
hard
work.
Therefore
, it is a brilliant way for finishing their task with enthusiastic way.
For instance
, history, which is compulsory subject in my country requires too much visualization in order to remember for longer time. By watching computer they can observe picture where they are more likely to capture in their
own
mind.

To conclude
, although
money
should
be utilized
on
teacher
who offer better environment to
school
, I convict that equipment are
also
necessary to
make
interest about study there should be equal participation by
school
.
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