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Houses or buildings preferences

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House represents the lifestyle of human beings and elite lifestyle is a dream of every human, that's why it's a norm now in mostly countries, also people are fond of beautiful architecturaised houses, beautiful houses with good exterior and interior make beings feel good about their selves and some people want good houses in good areas because where their children grow and learn, of course your surroundings play an important part in your child's growth, also the good houses and building the want to live in people choose areas according their priorities, everyone has different priorities like some people prefer it in the center of the town where they can easily reach and could have access to everything, and also people want houses with good views some like where there is a bit of nature, some prefer a beach view, I just believe because this is how the modern life is now, your house attract others towards, you, people takes interest in you by seeing at the type of house you live in, also most people prefer they easily get access to a lot of stuff like gym, sports gala, supermarkets near their houses or maybe on the building they live in. It's easy to search now because of technology, you can search the type of houses or buildings with benefits you want online, also there are state agencies that help you find the type of houses you want for you and your family and there are guides who give you the tour of houses and there are newly built societies where you could also look according to your preferences, it's easy to find the house or building of your preference, it only depends on your budget.
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represents the lifestyle of human beings and elite lifestyle is a dream of every human, that's why it's a norm
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people
are fond of
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beautiful
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architecturaised
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,
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beautiful
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houses
with
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good
exterior and interior
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make
beings feel
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good
about their selves and
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some
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people
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want
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good
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houses
in
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good
areas
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because
where their children grow and learn,
of course
your surroundings play an
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important
part in your child's growth,
also
the
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good
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and
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building
the
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want
to
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live
in
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people
choose areas according their priorities, everyone has
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different
priorities like
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some
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people
prefer it in the center of the town where they can
easily
reach and could have access to everything, and
also
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people
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want
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houses
with
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good
views
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some
like where there is a bit of nature,
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some
prefer a beach view, I
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just
believe
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because
this is how the modern life is
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now
, your
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house
attract others towards, you,
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people
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takes
interest in you by seeing at the type of
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house
you
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live
in,
also
most
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people
prefer they
easily
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get
access to
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a lot of
stuff like gym, sports gala, supermarkets near their
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houses
or maybe on the
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building
they
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live
in.

It's easy to search
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now
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because
of technology, you can search the type of
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houses
or
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buildings
with benefits you
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want
online,
also
there are state agencies that
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help
you find the type of
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houses
you
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want
for you and your family and there are guides who give you the tour of
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houses
and there are
newly
built societies where you could
also
look according to your preferences, it's easy to find the
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house
or
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building
of your preference, it
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only
depends on your budget.
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IELTS essay Houses or buildings preferences

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
287 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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