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Use of mobile is increased recent days. What is the positive and negative points of it.

Use of mobile is increased recent days. What is the positive and negative points of it. n6Xqg
There are serval thing invented by inventor make people's life better than previous but also has a negative impact on human being. Utilisation of mobile phone is enhanced significantly day by day. Although it is useful device for people such as emergency situation and educational support, has also worked negatively like addiction of application and games. Initiate with mobile phone is very good invention for people who live on Earth. It make human life very easy and work effectively in some situations such as in emergency situation people call someone for help if they have mobile phone. Also, in this these days, people can talk to another person who live in thousand km away from their home what is more, most of school colleges and Educational Institute run online courses which is learnt by student via mobile phone so, people can make life easy through mobile phone. It is true that mobile phone has positive. But also some negative effect which are not forgottable like student addicted by games when too much use of phone also adults now day spend their maximum time for chatting in apps like WhatsApp and Facebook. Additionally, sometime students cannot concentrate on study or work because of entertaining apps and games recently according to report of Times of India 30% student in the world and not able to focus completely on today due to too much use of mobile phone so much use of mobile mobile phone is harm peoples heavily To conclude 14 educational purpose and an emergency situation is reliable but when it become addiction then it impacted badly.
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invented by inventor
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make
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people
's life better than previous
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but
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negative
impact on human being.
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Utilisation
of mobile
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phone
is enhanced
significantly
day by day. Although it
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is useful
device for
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people
such as emergency
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situation
and educational support, has
also
worked
negatively
like addiction of application and games.

Initiate with mobile
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phone
is
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very
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invention for
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people
who
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live
on Earth. It
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make
human life
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easy and work
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in
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some
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people
call someone for
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help
if they have mobile
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phone
.
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, in this these days,
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people
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what is more
,
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colleges and Educational Institute run online courses which is
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by
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student
via mobile
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phone
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,
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make
life easy through mobile phone.

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positive
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addicted by games when too much
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of
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phone
also
adults
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day spend their maximum time for chatting in apps like WhatsApp and Facebook.
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, sometime
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students
cannot concentrate on study or work
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because
of entertaining apps and games recently according to report of Times of India 30%
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student
in the world and not able to focus completely on
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today
due to too much
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use
of mobile
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phone
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so
much
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mobile mobile
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is harm
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To conclude
14 educational purpose and an emergency
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situation
is reliable
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but
when it
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become
addiction then it impacted
badly
.
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IELTS essay Use of mobile is increased recent days. What is the positive and negative points of it.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
266 words
5.5
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