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unpaid work hours done by married women and married men

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This figure includes information about unpaid work hours done by married women and married men. Each bar is related to married man or women without children, with one child or two children, and with three or more children. As it is clear, families with more number of children spend more time working without payment since they probably should take care of their bigger number members in their family. However, the first category of families without child has done the least amount of unpaid works. Also, from all three categories, it is quite obvious that main part of the burden of the unpaid job for a family is on the shoulders of women. In categories with more children the unpaid work hours carried out by women increases as well, while these hours reduces for men. This may be happened due to the fact that in these sorts of families women become more focused on their children and nurturing, and they work in home as housewife. To sum up, this figure implies that women has bigger share of unpaid house works specially in families with more children. This situation may be resulted because of taking the housewife role by women in families with larger number of members, which also decreases the activity of men in home.
This figure includes information about unpaid
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work
hours done by married
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women
and married
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men
. Each bar
is related
to married
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man
or
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women
without
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children
, with one child or two
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children
, and with three or more children.

As it is
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clear
,
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families
with more number of
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children
spend more time working without payment since they
probably
should take care of their bigger number members in their
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family
.
However
, the
first
category of
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families
without child has done the least amount of unpaid works.
Also
, from all three categories, it is quite obvious that main part of the burden of the unpaid job for a
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family
is on the shoulders of
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women
. In categories with more
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children
the unpaid
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work
hours carried out by
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women
increases
as well
, while these hours
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reduces
for
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men
. This may
be happened
due to the fact that in these sorts of
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families
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women
become more focused on their
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children
and nurturing, and they
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work
in home as housewife.

To sum up, this figure implies that
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women
has bigger share of unpaid
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house
works
specially
in
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families
with more
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children
. This situation may
be resulted
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because
of taking the housewife role by
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women
in
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families
with larger number of members, which
also
decreases the activity of
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men
in home.
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IELTS essay unpaid work hours done by married women and married men

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
214 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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