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Unlimited use of cars may cause what problems? to reduce problems, should we discourage people to use cars?

Unlimited use of cars may cause what problems? to reduce problems, should we discourage people to use cars? ORORM

There has been rising of issues due to the unrestricted use of automobiles. To aid in alleviating this problem, one should’nt just focus on restricting the people from driving vehicles. The government should lay down effective laws to curb this issue. In this essay I will suggest solutions to these problems we are facing today. In the recent years population has grown rapidly, thereby increasing demand for necessities such as cars, gadgets etc. One of the main problems that we suffer from on a global scale is traffic congestion and air pollution, which is a result of everyone owning private vehicles, which they use to commute to work or carry out their daily chores. For instance, in a nuclear family, all individuals are working and respectively have their own means of transport. Thus, the vehicles owned per family is at least 2 or more. This inadvertly causes traffic jams and pollutes the environment by release of the toxic gases into the air. One cannot be asked to stop using cars but certain limitations by the law should be encouraged. However, these problems can be resolved as long as the government and the public work together to take some serious actions. Traffic can be controlled if the authorities implement odd and even car policy which has been implemented in the city of New Delhi in India, wherein cars with even and odd number registration plates are allowed to drive on alternate day. In addition, people should switch to battery operated cars and avoid using fuel as much as possible to prevent global warming. To conclude, traffic and air pollution can be diminished only if the people and the government work together hand in hand by encouraging people to opt for battery operated cars and to minimize their vehicle usage as much as possible.

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problem
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should’nt
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just
 focus on restricting the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
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vehicles
. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
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problems
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years
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, thereby increasing demand for necessities such as You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
, gadgets etc. One of the main You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problems
 that we suffer from on a global scale is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransportationshipmentservicetravelinfluxgridlock
traffic
 congestion and air pollution, which is a result of everyone owning private You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvancarbustruckautomobile
vehicles
, which they Make sure that 'use to' is correct. For habitual actions in the past or to mean 'accustomed to', use "used to".used to
use to
 commute to work or carry out their daily chores. For instance
, in a nuclear family, all individuals are working and respectively
 have their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 means of transport. Thus
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvancarbustruckautomobile
vehicles
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owned
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traffic
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stop
 using You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
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 certain limitations by the law should be encouraged
.

However
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problems
 can be resolved
 as long as the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
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 and the public work together to take This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 serious actions. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransportationshipmentservicetravelinfluxgridlock
Traffic
 can be controlled
 if the authorities implement odd and even You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 policy which has been implemented
 in the city of New Delhi in India, wherein You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
 with even and odd number registration plates are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 to drive on alternate day. In addition
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 should switch to battery operated You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
 and avoid using fuel as much as possible to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 global warming.

To conclude
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransportationshipmentservicetravelinfluxgridlock
traffic
 and air pollution can be diminished
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 if the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 and the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 work together hand in hand by encouraging You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 to opt for battery operated You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
 and to minimize their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvancarbustruckautomobile
vehicle
 usage as much as possible. 