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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages? v.2

University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages? v. 2
Students who prefer to study overseas is on the rise. While there are several advantages to studying in foreign universities including learning new cultures and receiving a good quality of education, there are disadvantages too which includes adjusting to weather conditions and social and linguistic differences. In my opinion, irrespective of having initial struggles, It is always advantageous to study in foreign counties, which can help students to broaden their horizons. There are a lot of benefits to studying in another country. Firstly, students get to experience and learn about new cultures. This helps them to understand, respect and get along with new people. Secondly, most of the time, students choose universities that are well known for providing quality education. Therefore students receive excellent education which can help them to build their future. For example, As an Indian student in the united states of America, I got a chance to learn American culture and I received an excellent quality of education, which helped me to become a better person. Even though there are advantages in studying abroad, there is a number of challenges too. Students often face challenges when they choose to study in other countries. On the one hand, the weather conditions in the host country can be quite challenging to adopt. This adaptation can affect the health and well being of the student, in turn disrupting their studies. On the other hand, students face social and linguistic challenges. It can be quite confusing to understand the rituals and customs of a new country and the local languages and slangs. For Instance, when I moved from India to the USA, I faced very harsh winter weather and initially struggled to understand the social norms. In conclusion, There are a lot of students willing to move to foreign countries for their studies. While this has a lot of benefits including learning new cultures and receiving a good education, there are challenges associated with it, which includes adjusting to weather conditions and difficulties in understanding the languages. In my opinion, Despite having all these challenges, studying overseas is ultimately superior, as it helps an individual in his overall growth, both personally and academically.
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in foreign counties, which can
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IELTS essay University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
362 words
6
Overall Band Score
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