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University students always focus on one specialist subject, but some people think universities should encourage their students to study a range of subjects in addition to their own subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there are different ranges of subjects offered by institutions. Students in university focus and choose only one subject all the time. However, it is believed by some people that children should be encouraged by an educational institution to study different subjects besides their own subject. Although I agree that students should pay attention to learn a variety of subjects, I believe that studying only one subject helps to attain specialisation and expertise in that particular major. It is irrefutable that providing the utmost attention to only a major subject would help the individuals to attain perfection in that. This is because students will spend time most of their time studying and reading the materials related to that subject. As a result, they will gain a deeper knowledge and have a career in that major. For example, Students admitted to law colleges, medical colleges turn out to be lawyers and doctors respectively. On the other hand, if university students will learn a lot of subjects, they will have a decent understanding of a variety of subjects. There would be many options for an individual to choose any subject for a career. This us useful for someone who has no intention of finding a specialist job. For instance, most of the students nowadays study every subject and later on do jobs in every field. To conclude, though I agree that focussing on just one subject is vitally important to gain depth knowledge and specialisation, I think that pursuing multiple subjects at institutions enables students to have a broad understanding of all of those subjects.
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specialisation
and expertise in that particular major.

It is irrefutable that providing the utmost attention to
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only
a major
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would
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help
the individuals to attain perfection in that. This is
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students
will spend time most of their time studying and reading the materials related to that
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subject
.
As a result
, they will gain a deeper knowledge and have a career in that major.
For example
,
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Students
admitted to law colleges, medical colleges turn out to be lawyers and doctors
respectively
.

On the other hand
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students
will learn
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a lot of
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, they will have a decent understanding of a variety of
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subjects
. There would be
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many
options for an individual to choose any
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subject
for a career. This us useful for someone who has no intention of finding a specialist job.
For instance
, most of the
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students
nowadays study every
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subject
and later on do jobs in every field.

To conclude
, though I
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agree
that focussing on
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just
one
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subject
is
vitally
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important
to gain depth knowledge and
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specialisation
, I
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think
that pursuing multiple
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subjects
at institutions enables
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students
to have a broad understanding of all of those
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subjects
.
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IELTS essay University students always focus on one specialist subject, but some people think universities should encourage their students to study a range of subjects in addition to their own subject.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
263 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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