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University Personal Statemet

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I am Ali S. AlSalaim. I was born and grew up in Najran city in the southern area of Saudi Arabia. After completing, my high school, I joined the Architectural Engineering department at Najran university and graduated in 2020. I engaged in my first job at SASROCK as Project Support Engineer since Jan 2021 to present. During my experience, I learned many things starting from meeting colleagues from more than 15 nationalities and knowing about their cultures and languages that enhanced my communication and teamwork skills as well as insight into the business in general. During my bachelor’s degree I was interested in the engineering economics, project management and physics. After I took those subjects, I realized my passion to learn more about them. However, in my work experience as Project Support Engineer I have tried the practical side of my passions and working with professionals which inspired me to improve my skills in management and business processes. And I decided to study a master’s program in related subjects. One of my colleagues holds a master’s degree in Engineering Management from Coventry University in the UK. He advised me to study in the UK to live the experience of studying in the most prestigious academic destinations and met students from all over the world. Throughout my search, the master's in management in University of Edinburgh caught my eyes, especially the flexibility in the optional modules which will help a lot to customize my studying as much as I need. Such a degree from world ranked university will improve my career and change my life by learning new knowledge that could lead me to distinguish in the market or even my own business. Thank you for considering my application.
I am Ali S.
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AlSalaim
. I
was born
and grew up in
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Najran
city in the southern area of Saudi Arabia. After completing, my high school, I
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joined
the Architectural Engineering department at
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Najran
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university
and graduated in 2020.

I engaged in my
first
job at
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SASROCK
as Project Support Engineer since Jan 2021 to present. During my experience, I learned
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many
things starting from meeting colleagues from more than 15 nationalities and knowing about their cultures and languages that enhanced my communication and teamwork
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skills
as well
as insight into the business
in general
.

During my bachelor’s degree I
was interested
in the engineering economics, project
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
management
and physics. After I took those subjects, I realized my passion to learn more about them.

However
, in my work experience as Project Support Engineer I have tried the practical side of my passions and working with professionals which inspired me to
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improve
my
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skills
in
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management
and business processes. And I decided to study a master’s program in related subjects. One of my colleagues holds a master’s degree in Engineering
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Management
from Coventry
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University
in the UK. He advised me to study in the UK to
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live
the experience of studying in the most prestigious academic destinations and met students from all over the world.

Throughout my search, the master's in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
management
in
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University
of Edinburgh caught my eyes,
especially
the flexibility in the optional modules which will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
a lot to customize my studying as much as I need. Such a degree from world ranked
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university
will
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improve
my career and
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change
my life by learning new knowledge that could lead me to distinguish in the market or even my
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own
business.

Thank you for considering my application.
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IELTS essay University Personal Statemet

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
288 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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