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A human looking forward to a continuous development and meaningful achievements, a pharmacist dream with more organized and digitally developmented feild. I believe in data as the second generation of human beings transformations, on the base of the first one, which is writing. While writing down information was the keystone of science development, highly and accurtly segemented data is the key to develop any field in the near and relatively far future. As a pharmacist I have a faith that our field still very virgin and requires a great efforts to creat a new generation of pharmaceutical sciences. Crazy genious ideas can change the world, whatever, the dilemma is our abilities and patience to make the impossible possible.
A human looking forward to a continuous development and meaningful achievements, a pharmacist dream with more organized and
digitally
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developmented
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feild
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I believe in data as the second generation of human beings transformations, on the base of the
first
one, which is writing.

While writing down information was the keystone of science development,
highly
and
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accurtly
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segemented
data is the key to develop any field in the near and
relatively
far future.

As a pharmacist I have a faith that our field
still
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very
virgin and requires a great
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efforts
to
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creat
a new generation of pharmaceutical sciences.

Crazy
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genious
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ideas
can
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change
the world, whatever, the dilemma is our abilities and patience to
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make
the impossible possible.
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IELTS essay human looking forward to a continuous development and

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
118 words
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