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University must pay the bill. Do you agree or disagree

University must pay the bill. Do you agree or disagree XVooN

It is believed that higher education is more beneficial to students than community and, therefore, the cost of it must be covered by them. Although students can take advantage of universities directly, I would argue that fees should be paid or subsidized by the government for certain factors. There are several reasons why I am on the side of supporting students with financial aid and scholarships. Firstly, university's tuition fees are costly in most countries which can offer high-quality education. It is unrealistic that all school-leavers can afford to pursue their academic life regardless of their high potential. If these prospective students are not provided with merit-based or need-based scholarships, society might lose its future leaders. Secondly, it is undeniable that once university studies are completed, numerous high-performing students start to serve the community in various fields, ranging from military to medicine. Having invested a huge amount of money into education, the government will eventually reap the benefits. For example, after being destroyed in World War II, in order to boost its economy without natural resources, Germany give education financial and administrative support. In turn, its highly educated workforce, today, constitutes Germany's most important economic asset. Thirdly when students do not pay attention to money, they can focus better on their studies. The stress of paying for their education can negatively impact their consideration during the time when they are supposed to be learning. In conclusion, while the benefits of tertiary education are enjoyed by the individuals, they ultimately contribute to the society. Hence, the cost of it must be paid by the government.

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 is more beneficial to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
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, the cost of it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
be covered
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students
 can take advantage of universities directly
, I would argue that fees should be paid
 or subsidized by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 for certain factors. There are several reasons why I am on the side of supporting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 with financial aid and scholarships. Firstly
, university's tuition fees are costly in most countries which can offer high-quality You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudyschooling
education
. It is unrealistic that all school-leavers can afford to pursue their academic life regardless of their high potential. If these prospective You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 are not provided with merit-based or need-based scholarships, society might lose its future leaders.

Secondly
, it is undeniable that once university studies are completed
, numerous high-performing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
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start
 to serve the community in various fields, ranging from military to medicine. Having invested a huge amount of money into You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudyschooling
education
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 will eventually
 reap the benefits. For example
, after being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishedruined
destroyed
 in World War II, in order to boost its economy without natural resources, Germany give You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudyschooling
education
 financial and administrative support. In turn, its highly
 educated workforce, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
, constitutes Germany's most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 economic asset. Thirdly
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students
 do not pay attention to money, they can focus better on their studies. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 of paying for their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudyschooling
education
 can negatively
 impact their consideration during the time when they are supposed
 to be learning.

In conclusion
, while the benefits of tertiary You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudyschooling
education
are enjoyed
 by the individuals, they ultimately
 contribute to the society. Hence
, the cost of it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
be paid
 by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
. 