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University education should be restricted to the very best academic students, rather than being available to a large proportion of young people. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

University education should be restricted to the very best academic students, rather than being available to a large proportion of young people. 883V
University education can be exclusive to the extremely best academic students, instead of being open to a vast percentage of young individuals. This essay disagrees that higher education should be limited to talented students. Firstly, this essay will discuss the right to education and secondly, discuss how On the one hand, The human rights regulations stipulate that the right to education is guaranteed to all, so everyone must be given equal opportunities to realize their potential and not be restricted to specific people. According to Article 13 of the International Covenant on Economic, Social and Cultural Rights of the United Nations, "Education shall be available to all. " On the other hand, Expanding opportunities to enter universities reduces the shortage of workers' resources to the market, especially since most of the available job opportunities require that the applicant hold a university degree. according to a survey published by Cambridge University in 2019, 78% of job advertisements and job applicants required a university degree or higher. In conclusion, University education should be not restricted because education is everyone’s right, and also is to meet the market’s need for qualified people.
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can be exclusive to the
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academic students,
instead
of being open to a vast percentage of young individuals. This essay disagrees that higher
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education
should
be limited
to talented students.
Firstly
, this essay will discuss the
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right
to
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education
and
secondly
, discuss how

On the one hand, The human
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rights
regulations stipulate that the
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right
to
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education
is guaranteed
to all,
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so
everyone
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be
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given
equal opportunities to realize their potential and not
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people
. According to Article 13 of the International Covenant on Economic, Social and Cultural
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of the United Nations,
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Education shall be available to all.
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On the other hand
, Expanding opportunities to enter
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universities
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reduces
the shortage of workers' resources to the market,
especially
since most of the available job opportunities require that the applicant hold a
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university
degree.
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according
to a survey published by Cambridge
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University
in 2019, 78% of job advertisements and job applicants required a
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university
degree or higher.

In conclusion
,
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education
should be not restricted
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because
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education
is everyone’s
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, and
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meet
the market’s need for qualified
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IELTS essay University education should be restricted to the very best academic students, rather than being available to a large proportion of young people.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
189 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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