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Unemployement rates among women in uk in years of 2013 and 2014.

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The bar chart shows the unemployement rates among womenin the countries that make up the UK, both in 2013 and 2014. Units are measured in percentage. Overall, there has generalky been a small decrease in female unemployement rate from 2013 to 2014 except scotland. In 2013, 5. 6% of women in Northern Irland were unemployed. The only country with smaller percentage of women unemployed was Wales, with a rate of 5. 4%. Both countries saw a decrease in the percentage of unemployed women in 2014. In Northern Ireland, the percentage fell to 5%. England has the greatest percentage of jobless women in 2013, with 6. 8%. However, this decreaded by 0. 3% in 2014. Lastly Scotlsnd was the only country which had an increasing percentage of jobless women. In 2013, it had 6. 1 % of women out of work. This increased to 6. 7 % in 2014, making the country with the highest female unemlloyement rate of the four countries.
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IELTS essay Unemployement rates among women in uk in years of 2013 and 2014.

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