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undoubtedly, human being encounter with various problems and challenges in own life span. a controversy question is aroused attention of society whether they enable to solve their problems without help of government. in response of this question, opinions are different. a number of experts advocate the statement and others contradics them. as far as i am concerned, i partly will agree with this calim. i fill this ways for following reasons. to begin with, for solving environmental problems government should help. nowadays'modern society are strugling with various enviromental issue such as deforestion, global warining and so on, that they pose threat to survive human. undispensably, hence it is neccessary to take crucial measures for mitigate or omit effects of detrimental effect of these events to be prevented from getting to a serious critical. since these dilemmas have accumaleted during long time period and having extensive wide range. hence, it is not only need to spend plenty of time and huge money to deal with them. but it is also neccessary to participate one or several groups or countries in this regard. for instance, paris treaty is obvious example in this regard. under this agreement, memebered countries ought to reduce greenhouse gas to be avoided global warming. while, in hustle and bustle of modern society, no families have enough time to take neccessary action in this relevance, as well as they cannot afford its financial burden. although a number of environment agencies are active in diverse field. but they have no enough powerfull to safegard surroundings. another reason that i think that governments should assiss to handle with human life adversity is society security. it is a undiable fact that statistics of organised crimes, vilonce and offends has been increased in modern era more than past. even with of technology development, a number of unlaw activity are commeted such as hacking. in this circumstance, only public organizations can enact enforcing law and take a punishment in the case that law is violenced. obviously, no individuals are in place to restrict others untill the laws athorize them. for other thing, persons know less how to defand themselves against crimers. put in nutshell, according to above mentioned, it can be concluded that government still plays a vital role in solving problems. this is becaue a number of problems are extentive and time consuming.
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undoubtedly
, human being
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encounter
with various
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problems
and challenges in
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own
life span.
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a
controversy question
is aroused
attention of
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society
whether they enable to solve their
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problems
without
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help
of
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government
.
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in
response of this question, opinions are
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different
.
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a
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number
of experts advocate the statement
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and others
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contradics
them.
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as
far as
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i
am concerned
,
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i
partly will
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agree
with this
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calim
.
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i
fill
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this
ways for following reasons.

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to
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begin
with, for solving environmental
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problems
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government
should
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help
.
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nowadays
'modern
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society
are
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strugling
with various
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enviromental
issue such as
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deforestion
, global
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warining
and
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so
on, that they pose threat to survive human.
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undispensably
,
hence
it is
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neccessary
to take crucial measures for mitigate or omit effects of detrimental effect of these
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events
to be
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prevented
from getting to a serious critical.
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since
these dilemmas have
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accumaleted
during long
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time
period and having extensive wide range.
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hence
, it is not
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only
need to spend
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of
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time
and huge money to deal with them.
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but
it is
also
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neccessary
to participate one or several groups or countries in this regard.
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for
instance,
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paris
treaty is obvious example in this regard.
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under
this agreement,
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memebered
countries ought to
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reduce
greenhouse gas to
be avoided
global warming.
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while
, in hustle and bustle of modern
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society
, no families have
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enough
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time
to take
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neccessary
action in this relevance,
as well
as they cannot afford its financial burden.
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although
a
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number
of environment agencies are active in diverse field.
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but
they have no
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enough
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powerfull
to
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safegard
surroundings.

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another
reason that
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i
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governments
should
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assiss
to handle with human life adversity is
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society
security.
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it
is
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a
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undiable
fact that statistics of
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organised
crimes,
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vilonce
and offends has
been increased
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even
with of technology development, a
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number
of
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unlaw
activity are
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commeted
such as hacking.
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in
this circumstance,
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only
public organizations can enact enforcing law and take a punishment in the case that law is
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violenced
.
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obviously
, no individuals are in place to restrict others
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untill
the laws
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athorize
them.
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for
other thing, persons know less how to
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defand
themselves against
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crimers
.

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put
in nutshell, according to above mentioned, it can
be concluded
that
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government
still
plays a vital role in solving
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problems
.
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this
is
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becaue
a
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extentive
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time consuming
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IELTS essay undoubtedly, human being encounter with various problems and challenges in own life spa

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
390 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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