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My business life. I explained my background.

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And now, I have been working at Borusan Logistics since 2018. Working with live systems requires heavy responsibilities. I have to sure application performance, availability, and systems security. Generally, my responsibilities are sql server maintenance, installation and configuration, backups, monitoring, performance tuning, index maintenance, creating sql queries for specific purpose, and I give support all other related tasks with database. I am working with mostly sql servers. Sometimes I do other database tasks. Like giving permissions on MongoDB. Sometimes I am creating pipelines on Azure Data Factory for reporting team, import some data to Azure Data Factory. I've used 3rd party tools for monitoring and systems health like Redgate, Idera, app dynamics, prtg, host monitor. I manage my tasks on Jira. Jira sends me too much mail to giving me information. Actually many of them doesn't important. Because of that, I've created a SQL server mail job on the sql server for sending status of old tasks or new jira tasks via email. I've created special SQL scripts and I've designed HTML themes for these emails. I've been using just Redgate on Borusan Logistics for dev, test, and production deployments. I do performance tuning on slow queries or new SQL queries. I've created my own notification structure for detecting slow queries on SQL server. I created this structure with SQL queries and I've created a SQL server job for checking system regularly. I've created a powerbi dashboard for seeing linked servers, user databases, SQL server agent status. My target was to create a dashboard and understand how to create a structure like this on powerbi and have a little bit fun. I've created many structures because I enjoy writing scripts and creating new flows. When I am doing my job I always think about how I can automate processes. How I can make processes easier. I've created the first uat environment in Borusan internal systems. I've listed all of steps. Then I've created many SQL scripts. These scripts does these steps. Script takes automatically backup. Then checks the backup if this backup restored before. Then restores the new db with different db name. Takes the db to simple mode and do shrinks the database files. Does restore database. Does grant permissions. Then deletes the old database and renames new database. End of the process it sends information email to development teams.
And
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, I have been working at
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Borusan
Logistics since 2018.

Working with
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live
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systems
requires heavy responsibilities. I
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have to
sure application performance, availability, and
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systems
security.

Generally
, my responsibilities are
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sql
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server
maintenance, installation and configuration, backups, monitoring, performance tuning, index maintenance, creating
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sql
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queries
for specific purpose, and I give support all other related
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tasks
with database. I am working with
mostly
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sql
servers.

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Sometimes
I do other database
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tasks
. Like giving permissions on MongoDB.
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Sometimes
I am creating pipelines on Azure Data Factory for reporting team, import
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some
data to Azure Data Factory.

I've
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used
3rd party tools for monitoring and
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systems
health like
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Redgate
,
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Idera
, app dynamics,
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prtg
, host monitor.

I manage my
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tasks
on Jira. Jira
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sends
me too much mail to giving me information. Actually
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many
of them doesn't
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important
.
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Because
of that,
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I've
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created
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a
SQL
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server
mail job on the
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sql
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server
for sending status of
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old
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tasks
or
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new
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jira
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tasks
via email.
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I've
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created
special SQL scripts and
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I've
designed HTML themes for these emails.

I've been using
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just
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Redgate
on
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Borusan
Logistics for dev,
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test
, and production deployments.

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I
do performance tuning on slow
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queries
or
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new
SQL
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queries
.
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I
've
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created
my
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own
notification
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structure
for detecting slow
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queries
on SQL
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server
.
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I
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created
this
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structure
with SQL
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queries
and
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I've
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created
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a
SQL
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server
job for checking
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system
regularly
.

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I
've
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created
a
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powerbi
dashboard for seeing linked
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servers
, user databases, SQL
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server
agent status. My target was to create a dashboard and understand how to create a
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structure
like this on
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powerbi
and have a
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little bit
fun.

I've
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created
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many
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structures
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because
I enjoy writing scripts and creating
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flows.
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When
I am doing my job I always
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think
about how I can automate processes. How I can
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make
processes easier.

I've
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created
the
first
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uat
environment in
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Borusan
internal systems.

I've listed
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all of steps
. Then
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I've
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created
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many
SQL scripts.

These scripts
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does
these steps.

Script takes
automatically
backup.

Then
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checks
the backup if this backup restored
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before
.

Then restores the
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new
db with
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different
db name.

Takes the db to simple mode and do
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shrinks
the database files.

Does restore database.

Does grant permissions.

Then deletes the
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old
database and renames
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new
database.

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End
of the process it
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sends
information email to development teams.
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IELTS essay My business life. I explained my background.

Essay
  American English
21 paragraphs
391 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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