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Under British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The judges in The Britain and Australia have no track of the culprit's previous criminal activities. It is thought that this lack of access to the perpetrator's criminal data as a savior for the culprit. A proportion of lawyers is of the view that such a practice should be abolished, and before reaching any verdict, judges should look in to the past criminal activity data of the person facing the trial. Even though a crime is always liable to punishment, I am totally supportive of the idea that the panel must keep in view the culprit's past activities, and this discussion will elaborate my viewpoint. The jurisdiction law in the United Kingdom and Australia denies the judges all the access to the person's past criminal activity record. In my view, one does not simply commit a heinous act in a whim. A criminal act, be it minor or a major activity, is always a deliberate attempt. A hard pill to swallow, most of the criminals facing trials are regular law-breakers. One can not simply just pretend that the person woke up on the wrong side of bed and ended up doing an illegal act out. For example, last week as I was going through the daily newspaper, I read about a young guy who was caught sexually assaulting a young lady red handed. The trial in his case not only did investigate the current crime, the judges also went through his past criminal record; as it turned out, there previously had been many cases of sexual harassment and assaults reported against him, but he was never punished due to lack of evidence. Reviewing the past criminal record of a person not only establishes the evidence, it also reinstates his position as a culprit. Second, the record of one's previous unlawful activities can help the jury set a punishment accordingly. One who's trial is supported by a series of illegal activities in the past should be penalized accordingly. This, not only sets an example of a crystal clear justice, it also acts as a message to any one who is at the verge of doing an unlawful act. For example, the same perpetrator I talked about in the previous paragraph; he was brought castrated chemically. This clearly sent out message to anyone, who in their remotest of notions, were thinking of sexually assaulting another person. The past criminal record thus helps establish a criterion for punishment. While the laws can be contradictory, I am of the view that the judges should always keep in view the past criminal activity data of the person facing the trial, as many of them are regular offenders. This also establishes how severe a punishment should the criminal be subjected to.
The
judges
in The Britain and Australia have no
track
of the culprit's previous
criminal
activities
. It is
thought
that this lack of access to the perpetrator's
criminal
data as a savior for the culprit. A proportion of lawyers is of the
view
that such a practice should
be abolished
, and
before
reaching any verdict,
judges
should look in to the
past
criminal
activity
data of the
person
facing the
trial
.
Even though
a crime is always liable to punishment, I am
totally
supportive of the
idea
that the panel
must
keep
in
view
the culprit's
past
activities
, and this discussion will elaborate my viewpoint.

The jurisdiction law in the United Kingdom and Australia denies the
judges
all the access to the person's
past
criminal
activity
record
. In my
view
, one does not
simply
commit a heinous
act
in a whim. A
criminal
act
, be it minor or a major
activity
, is always a deliberate attempt. A
hard
pill to swallow, most of the
criminals
facing
trials
are regular law-breakers. One can not
simply
just
pretend that the
person
woke up on the
wrong
side of bed and ended up doing an illegal
act
out.
For example
, last week as I was going through the daily newspaper, I read about a young guy who
was caught
sexually
assaulting a young lady
red handed
. The
trial
in his case not
only
did investigate the
current
crime, the
judges
also
went through his
past
criminal
record
; as it turned out, there previously had been
many
cases of sexual harassment and assaults reported against him,
but
he was never punished due to lack of evidence. Reviewing the
past
criminal
record
of a
person
not
only
establishes the evidence, it
also
reinstates his position as a culprit.

Second, the
record
of one's previous unlawful
activities
can
help
the jury set a punishment
accordingly
. One who's
trial
is supported
by a series of illegal
activities
in the
past
should
be penalized
accordingly
. This, not
only
sets an example of a crystal
clear
justice, it
also
acts
as a message to
any one
who is at the verge of doing an unlawful
act
.
For example
, the same perpetrator I talked about in the previous paragraph; he
was brought
castrated
chemically
. This
clearly
sent
out message to anyone, who in their remotest of notions, were thinking of
sexually
assaulting another
person
. The
past
criminal
record
thus
helps
establish a criterion for punishment.

While the laws can be contradictory, I am of the
view
that the
judges
should always
keep
in
view
the
past
criminal
activity
data of the
person
facing the
trial
, as
many
of them are regular offenders. This
also
establishes how severe a punishment should the
criminal
be subjected
to.
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IELTS essay Under British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case.

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