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Under British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today's world, access to criminal history of the accused is a highly debated topic. Although there is a clear rational behind this, I would argue that having a view on defandant's background would help the jury to take a more informed decision. Let us understand why is this the case. There are countless examples wherein a person wrongly accused of a crime has been sentenced, while some of the more serious offender can't wait to commit a crime once they are released from a prison. Having a same ground level assessment policy for both of them wouldn't be considered a fair trial in my opinion. Criminal record can help the jury to expedite the decision-making process thus saving precious time which can be used to process piles of existing pending cases. People in favour of this anonymity policy would like to argue that this policy ensures fair trail by making sure that decision-making process is not influenced by past mistakes thus, giving a person chance to improve in life. While this may be true in an utopian world, many statistics prove that 86% of the serious offender are back in prison just after 2 years of being released. In my experience, I have observed multiple petty theft like pickpocketing, pirated material distributer, etc. would repeat their acts even after being caught and let go after some days/months. They may have their fair share of difficulties behind this repeat offence but processing such case shouldn't waste the invaluable time of public court hearings. Taking everything into consideration, I would strongly support the case wherein jury has access to past criminal record of the defendant.
In
today
's world, access to criminal history of the accused is a
highly
debated topic. Although there is a
clear
rational
behind this, I would argue that having a view on
defandant
's background would
help
the jury to take a more informed decision.
Let
us understand why is this the case.

There are countless examples wherein a person
wrongly
accused of a crime has
been sentenced
, while
some
of the more serious offender can't wait to commit a crime once they
are released
from a prison. Having a same ground level assessment policy for both of them wouldn't
be considered
a
fair
trial in my opinion. Criminal record can
help
the jury to expedite the decision-making process
thus
saving precious time which can be
used
to process piles of existing pending cases.

People
in
favour
of this anonymity policy would like to argue that this policy ensures
fair
trail by making sure that decision-making process is not influenced by past mistakes
thus
, giving a person chance to
improve
in life. While this may be true in
an
utopian world,
many
statistics prove that 86% of the serious offender are back in prison
just
after 2 years of
being released
.

In my experience, I have observed multiple petty theft like
pickpocketing
, pirated material
distributer
, etc. would repeat their acts even after
being caught
and
let
go after
some
days/months. They may have their
fair
share of difficulties behind this repeat
offence
but
processing such case shouldn't waste the invaluable time of public court hearings. Taking everything into consideration, I would
strongly
support the case wherein jury has access to past criminal record of the defendant.
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IELTS essay Under British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case.

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