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Undeniable roles of historic sites

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Italy received 48. 6 million tourists in 2014, which made it the fifth most-visited country in the world ( (McCabe, 2016). In attempting to lure these tourists to the country, historical sites are, as a matter of fact, the biggest contributors because “the Italian museum system is a key attraction for tourism” (as cited in Harris, 2016). This paper aims to examine the significant roles of historic sites in Italy by analyzing their positive impacts on the growth of the economy and on enhancing people’s knowledge about the past. As far as the growth of the economy is concerned, historic sites play an essential role in boosting Italy’s tourism and generating income. First, historic sites attract more tourists to Italy, which contributes to the development of tourism. According to The Local (2017), the number of visitors to Italy’s museums increased 12, 5 percent in 2017 and are is forecast to rise. This impressive figure has shown the remarkable interests of tourists for the cultural sites and implied the witness of a considerable amount of entrance fees for the tourism economy. Secondly, the historic sites bring more jobs opportunities for the hosting community and generate income for many people. People are hired to do jobs in all aspects such as archeology, maintenance, security, management, sales, etc. By and large, historic sites have solved the problem of unemployment, which provides an enormous help for the local economy. A research conducted in 2013 showed that the tourism industry offered more than 2. 6 million jobs, which equaled to 11. 6% of entire Italian employment (Ali, Ciaschini, Pretaroli, Severini, & Socci, 2014). Another crucial role of historic sites is that they are the potential agents to enrich every (people’s) person’s knowledge about the past. There is indeed no better way to learn history other than to learn from tangible objects. Historic sites provide trustworthy artifacts for local residents to remember and preserve their own culture and origin. While through these artifacts, tourists can acquire knowledge about other cultures to make their trip more memorable. They can also make a comparison between two cultures in order to understand their own culture in depth. Furthermore, historic sites is are also a precious asset to educate young people. A field trip of learning in museums is an inspiring adventure for children. When I was younger, each time my teacher took me and my friends to the museum was an exciting time. I had a better understanding about the textbook which is somewhat boring to many people. The museums and its activities particularly encouraged me as a young child to learn about my own history and culture. All in all, historic sites’ roles are obvious. This paper has shown two of their typical roles with the case of Italy. They not only boost the tourism, but also educate people of all ages. It is necessary to develop the historic sites and preserve the objects inside it them.
Italy received 48. 6 million
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in 2014, which made it the fifth most-visited country in the world
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(McCabe, 2016). In attempting to lure these
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to the country, historical
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sites
are, as a matter of fact, the biggest contributors
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“the Italian
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museum
system is a key attraction for
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tourism”
(as cited in Harris, 2016). This paper aims to examine the significant
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roles
of
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historic
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sites
in Italy by analyzing their
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positive
impacts on the growth of the
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economy
and on enhancing
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people’s
knowledge about the past.

As far as the growth of the
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is concerned
,
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historic
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play an essential
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in boosting Italy’s
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and generating income.
First
,
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attract more
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tourists
to Italy, which contributes to the development of
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tourism
. According to The Local (2017), the number of visitors to Italy’s
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museums
increased 12, 5 percent in 2017 and are is forecast to rise. This impressive figure has shown the remarkable interests of
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tourists
for the cultural
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sites
and implied the witness of a considerable amount of entrance fees for the
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tourism
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economy
.
Secondly
, the
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historic
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bring more jobs opportunities for the hosting community and generate income for
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many
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people
.
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are hired
to do jobs in all aspects such as archeology, maintenance, security, management, sales, etc. By and large,
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historic
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have solved the problem of unemployment, which provides an enormous
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help
for the local
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economy
.
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industry offered more than 2. 6 million jobs, which equaled to 11. 6% of entire Italian employment (Ali,
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Ciaschini
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, 2014).

Another crucial
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of
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is that they are the potential agents to enrich every (
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’s) person’s knowledge about the past. There is
indeed
no better way to learn history other than to learn from tangible objects.
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provide trustworthy artifacts for local residents to remember and preserve their
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own
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culture
and origin. While through these artifacts,
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tourists
can acquire knowledge about other
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cultures
to
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their trip more memorable. They can
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in order to understand their
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in depth.
Furthermore
,
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is are
also
a precious asset to educate young
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. A field trip of learning in
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is an inspiring adventure for children. When I was younger, each time my teacher took me and my friends to the
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museum
was an exciting time. I had a better understanding about the textbook which is somewhat boring to
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many
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. The
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and its activities
particularly
encouraged me as a young child to learn about my
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own
history and culture.

All in all,
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sites’
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roles
are obvious. This paper has shown two of their typical
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with the case of Italy. They not
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boost the
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,
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educate
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of all ages. It is necessary to develop the
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and preserve the objects inside it them.
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IELTS essay Undeniable roles of historic sites

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