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Some people says that best way to solve environmental problems by increasing cost of fuel. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Undoubtable environment is proliferating day by day such as a global warming pollution exactra so most of Individual contact that increasing cost of fuel is is best way to solve environmental issue. I have affirmative approach with this statement will a elaborate key reason with the it not based on a transport and create inflation in subsequent paragraph with my opinion. There are a migraine of reasons to favour my stance with the most preponderant one is environment issue are not only based on transport a many other factor also affect this such as a industry pollution noise pollution accept numbers industry are established in many Areas where wastage of a company's create environment problem. Moreover noise pollution which is the create by industries during manufacturing even organised concert also increased noise pollution and affect environment. For example survey conducted by Cambridge University state that state that 79% of pollution is created by manufacturing as compared to to transport units. Another overfeat is a high rate of a fuel create inflation in countries full stop no doubt rich people will afford fuel at any cost but poor person face problem although it make difference between poor and rich class even increased extra issues for the largest ratio of lower and middle class is travelled by public transport if you'll become more costly than five years will be Rose up where as a prize of good also develop. To instance in India lost your cost of petrol w, as high that's why influence surfed with this even middle and flour class face problem. from all above mentioned reason one can conclude that environment issue are not only based on a fuel other factor affect it and this task also make price world.
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Undoubtable
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environment
is proliferating day by day such as a global warming
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pollution
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exactra
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so
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most of Individual
contact that increasing cost of
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fuel
is
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is best
way to solve environmental
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issue
. I have affirmative approach with this statement will
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a
elaborate key reason with
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the it
not based on a
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transport
and
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create
inflation in subsequent paragraph with my opinion. There are a
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migraine
of reasons to
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favour
my stance with the most preponderant one is
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environment
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issue
are not
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only
based on
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transport
a
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many
other factor
also
affect this such as
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a
industry
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pollution
noise
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pollution
accept numbers industry
are established
in
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many
Areas where wastage of a
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company
's
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create
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environment
problem.
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Moreover
noise
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pollution
which is the
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create
by industries during manufacturing even
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organised
concert
also
increased noise
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pollution
and affect
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environment
.
For example
survey conducted by Cambridge University
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state that state that
79% of
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pollution
is created
by manufacturing as compared
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to to
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transport
units. Another
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overfeat
is a high rate of a
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fuel
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create
inflation in countries full
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stop
no doubt rich
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people
will afford
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fuel
at any cost
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but
poor person face problem although it
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make
difference between poor and rich
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class
even increased extra
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issues
for the largest ratio of lower and middle
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class
is travelled
by public
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transport
if you'll become more costly than five years will be Rose up
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where as
a prize of
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good
also
develop. To instance in India lost your cost of petrol w, as high that's why influence surfed with this even middle and flour
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class
face problem.
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from
all above mentioned reason one can conclude that
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environment
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issue
are not
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only
based on a
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fuel
other factor affect it and this task
also
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make
price world.
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IELTS essay Some people says that best way to solve environmental problems by increasing cost of fuel.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
291 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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