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Types of Technology That Can Help Reduce Traffic Accidents

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Education is the fundamental rights of human being. Most people get knowledge for their life management and how to make good environment for their next generation. Formal education is the first pillar of life to get build more strong in coming disaster. Gaining knowledge is more important in the era of technology, control conflict and make good environmental. Firstly, now-a-day technology is rapidly growing in the field of education. Students are using technology to make easier their life. Furthermore, people find out more university to take online admission in domestic and foreign country without take class on physically. Most student are taken lesson from YouTube to get self prepare for their exam, that why technology is more usable in every education field. Secondly, in the era of the quarrels is least than the era of old age. However, people had less knowledge about conflict they could fight every field of life. Now the people getting more education they can understand about not to fight with each other. For example people gain education to deal their respect, make family member and generate strong environment. For this result, reducing conflict is built strong generation. Thirdly, growing of demand of people to make climate change. People use more vehicles that emission of carbon dioxide to reduce the oxygen level in the air. Furthermore, people cutting tree and burning forest. students are making strong knowledge to try to change the climate better. On this purpose education is to make the good environment for next generation. Getting education through technology use to better for everyone. People are educated to stop fight each other to understand their thought. Finally, controlling of climate in the technology era better of old age, for this result, education is make people more healthy and mentally and physically better
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environment for their
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in coming disaster. Gaining
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, control conflict and
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good
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easier their
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life
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find out more university to take online admission in domestic and foreign country without take
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on
physically
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are taken
lesson from YouTube to
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self prepare for their exam, that why
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technology
is more usable in every
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education
field.

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, in the
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era
of the quarrels is
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getting more
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they can understand about not to fight with each other.
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gain
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to deal their respect,
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family member and generate
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environment. For this result, reducing conflict
is built
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generation.

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, growing of demand of
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climate
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cutting tree and burning forest.
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the climate
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is to
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environment for
next
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better
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fight each other to understand their
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, controlling of climate in the
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more healthy and mentally and
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IELTS essay Types of Technology That Can Help Reduce Traffic Accidents

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
297 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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