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Honestly, I'm not a very good writer, but I always want my writing to be unique. I used to hate literature and didn't study it. There is even a group of friends who absolutely hate literature. As we grow up, my friends and I realized that literature is really necessary for life, it helps us to communicate and behave well. I know its importance; however, I still can't improve. And today I want to tell you about the process I created this article. When the teacher gave me an assignment to tell a story, it took me a long time to find the topic and write it. One thing that happens to me is that when I think about a topic that I want to write about, someone has already written about it. I struggled with finding topics that were easy for everyone. Because of that weird personality, I got into a lot of unnecessary trouble. When I looked at each class member's work, I felt helpless with my poor thinking. At that time, I wondered if I should give up. If I didn't write the essay, I wouldn't get marks for this assignment. Then I thought that no topic is also a story, and I can write this topic finding story. I actually realized that I was too complicated on the subject to have my own topic. Finally, I have a complete article of my own; an article is unique like I wanted.
Honestly
, I'm not a
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very
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good
writer,
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but
I always want my writing to be unique. I
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used
to hate literature and didn't study it. There is even a group of friends who
absolutely
hate literature. As we grow up, my friends and I realized that literature is
really
necessary for life, it
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helps
us to communicate and behave well. I know its importance;
however
, I
still
can't
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improve
. And
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today
I want to
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tell
you about the process I created this article. When the teacher gave me an assignment to
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tell
a story, it took me a long time to find the
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topic
and
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write
it. One thing that happens to me is that when I
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think
about a
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topic
that I want to
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write
about, someone has already written about it. I struggled with finding
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topics
that were easy for everyone.
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Because
of that weird personality, I
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got
into
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a lot of
unnecessary trouble. When I looked at each
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class
member's work, I felt helpless with my poor thinking. At that time, I wondered if I should give up. If I didn't
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write
the essay, I wouldn't
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get
marks for this assignment. Then I
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thought
that no
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topic
is
also
a story, and I can
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write
this
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topic
finding story. I actually realized that I was too complicated on the subject to have my
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own
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topic
.
Finally
, I have a complete article of my
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own
; an article is unique like I wanted.
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244 words
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