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two side of tourism. Tourism industries are growing rapidly in many countries which has both positive and negative aspects

two side of tourism. Tourism industries are growing rapidly in many countries which has both positive and negative aspects x8nJb
As a result of today’s globalized world, the costs of traveling places has become more cheaper than before. Tourism industries are growing rapidly in many countries which has both positive and negative aspects; however, both sides will be discussed in the following paragraphs. We know that tourism is very important for the revenue of some countries. Economiccally, it brings money into the country. Tourism industry has benefited not just the travelers but also many other sectors like hotels, restaurants, travel and tours companies and so on. For instance, huge tourism activity around Sydney Opera house has benefited thousands of local businesses. Moreover, such a trend are very likely to promote employment opportunities. In Nepal, for instance, tourism industry has covered a significant portion of total employment. This trend is extremely crucial as it promotes the overall development of the country. Another point I would like to make it that tourism can also create jobs for local people and help them to promote their lives. Most jobs for local people in the tourist industry are as servants, house maids, waiters, gardeners and other menial work. There also appear a lot of shops and small cafes where people can buy something unusual made by local people or have a snack. Can you imagine the world without tourism? Knowledge of other countries would be accessed mainly through the unreal world of books, radios, television and the Internet. Without physical interaction, it would be difficult to achieve world peace and promote understanding of environmental issues, security threads and poverty. Tourism is a way in which people from different countries can understand cultures, religions, and recognise existing problems. On the other hand, in addition to the important advantages of tourism. It has some drawbacks. Tourism is one of the principal contributions of pollution in the Mediterranean Sea and as the number of people increase, the problem worsen. Several laws and initiatives have been implemented in order to protect the Mediterranean Sea from further degradation. The rapid tourism development of Bali has had a great effect on its natural environment, affecting water resources, increasing pollution and localized flooding, as well as putting pressure on the island's infrastructure. In Trinidad and Tobago there are shortages of water due to the overpopulation of tourists on the island. The most damaging effect of tourism has been the destruction of coral reefs, as they are harvested for sale to tourists and destroyed by tourists stepping on them as they enter the water. Another worrying point to note is, some of the natural heritages and resources are deteriorating as a result of such activity. Tourists love to visit such places resulting more locals to shift there to promote their business. Hence, natural resources are into chaos. There are those that say that Barbados has been spoiled by becoming more commercial. However, the quality of life of the average Barbadian has improved through the direct and indirect benefits of tourism. No, it’s not the same beautiful island it was 20 or 30 years ago, but the standard of living is higher for the average guy in the street. In conclusion, I think the advantages of tourism activity outweighs the disadvantages because it promotes employment to the locals and growth of other related sectors. Although, it could lead to pollution and deterioration of natural resources, controlling activities like strong rules and emphasizing cleaning activities can help minimize the problems.
As a result
of
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today
’s globalized
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world
, the costs of traveling places has become
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more cheaper
than
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before
.
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Tourism
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industries
are growing
rapidly
in
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many
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countries
which has both
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positive
and
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negative
aspects;
however
, both sides will
be discussed
in the following paragraphs.

We know that
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tourism
is
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very
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important
for the revenue of
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some
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countries
.
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Economiccally
, it brings money into the
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country
.
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Tourism
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industry
has benefited not
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just
the travelers
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but
also
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many
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other
sectors like hotels, restaurants, travel and tours
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companies
and
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so
on.
For instance
, huge
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tourism
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activity
around Sydney Opera
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house
has benefited thousands of
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local
businesses.
Moreover
, such a trend are
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very
likely to
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promote
employment opportunities. In Nepal,
for instance
,
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tourism
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industry
has covered a significant portion of total employment. This trend is
extremely
crucial as it
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promotes
the
overall
development of the
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country
. Another point I would like to
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make
it that
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tourism
can
also
create jobs for
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local
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people
and
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help
them to
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promote
their
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lives
. Most jobs for
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local
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people
in the
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tourist
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industry
are as servants,
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house
maids, waiters, gardeners and
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other
menial work. There
also
appear
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a lot of
shops and
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small
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cafes
where
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people
can
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buy
something unusual made by
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local
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people
or have a snack. Can you imagine the
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world
without
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tourism
? Knowledge of
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other
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countries
would
be accessed
mainly
through the unreal
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world
of books, radios, television and the Internet. Without physical interaction, it would be difficult to achieve
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world
peace and
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promote
understanding of environmental issues, security threads and poverty.
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Tourism
is a way in which
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people
from
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different
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countries
can understand cultures, religions, and
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recognise
existing problems.

On the
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other
hand,
in addition
to the
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important
advantages of
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tourism
. It has
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some
drawbacks.
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Tourism
is one of the principal contributions of pollution in the Mediterranean Sea and as the number of
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people
increase, the problem worsen. Several laws and initiatives have
been implemented
in order to protect the Mediterranean Sea from
further
degradation. The rapid
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tourism
development of Bali has had a great effect on its
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
natural
environment, affecting water resources, increasing pollution and localized flooding,
as well
as putting pressure on the island's infrastructure. In Trinidad and Tobago there are shortages of water due to the overpopulation of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tourists
on the island. The most damaging effect of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tourism
has been the destruction of coral reefs, as they
are harvested
for sale to
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tourists
and
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destroyed
by
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tourists
stepping on them as they enter the water. Another worrying point to note is,
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some of the
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natural
heritages and resources are deteriorating
as a result
of such
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activity
.
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Tourists
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love
to visit such places resulting more
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locals
to shift there to
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promote
their business.
Hence
,
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natural
resources are into chaos. There are those that say that Barbados has
been spoiled
by becoming more commercial.
However
, the quality of life of the average Barbadian has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
through the direct and indirect benefits of
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tourism
. No, it’s not the same
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beautiful
island it was 20 or 30 years ago,
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but
the standard of living is higher for the average guy in the street.

In conclusion
, I
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think
the advantages of
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tourism
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activity
outweighs the disadvantages
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because
it
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promotes
employment to the
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locals
and growth of
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other
related sectors. Although, it could lead to pollution and deterioration of
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natural
resources, controlling
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activities
like strong
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rules
and emphasizing cleaning
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activities
can
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help
minimize the problems.
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IELTS essay two side of tourism. Tourism industries are growing rapidly in many countries which has both positive and negative aspects

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  American English
4 paragraphs
566 words
6.0
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