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Two rovers went to Marayntong, Bandarban for a tour. When they arrived they show place wasn’t clean enough. So, they decided to clean the area. Taking that kind of initiative is a great job.

Two rovers went to Marayntong, Bandarban for a tour. When they arrived they show place wasn’t clean enough. So, they decided to clean the area. Taking that kind of initiative is a great job. xPGm9
Two rovers went to Marayntong, Bandarban for a tour. When they arrived they show, the place was so dirty. So, they decided to clean the area. Taking that kind of initiative is a great job. Two rovers went to Marayntong, Bandarban for a tour. When they arrived they show place wasn’t clean enough. So, they decided to clean the area. Taking that kind of initiative is a great job. Two rovers went to Marayntong, Bandarban for a tour. When they arrived they show place wasn’t clean enough. So, they decided to clean the area. Taking that kind of initiative is a great job.
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Bandarban
for a tour. When they arrived they
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Taking that kind of initiative is a great job.

Two rovers went to
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Marayntong
,
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Bandarban
for a tour.
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When
they arrived they
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show place
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clean
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enough
.
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So
, they decided to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
clean
the area.

Taking that kind of initiative is a great job.

Two rovers went to
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Marayntong
,
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Bandarban
for a tour.
“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
they arrived they
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
show place
wasn’t
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
clean
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, they decided to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
clean
the area.

Taking that kind of initiative is a great job.
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IELTS essay Two rovers went to Marayntong, Bandarban for a tour. When they arrived they show place wasn’t clean enough. So, they decided to clean the area. Taking that kind of initiative is a great job.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
103 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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