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Trying hard or accepting the bad situation , own opinion

Trying hard or accepting the bad situation, own opinion x21Ey

In this global village, people have to face with challenging occasions in their daily life. The ways people see their problem are different. Some people prefer to accept the bad situation while others tend to try to get rid of that. On the one hand, accepting the right situation can make people feel relax. They can get mental problems unless they claim the worst situation which won’t meet their expectations. They can’t know what tomorrow will bring to them. For instance, a famous businessman can fall down into the poor situation within a night. From the perspective of basic workers, they have to accept which work they can get with low education background. In spite of having few jobs to offer them, they have to take it for the basic needs. On the other hand, trying hard in work can help people to achieve their goals. Many well-known people are initially at the poor situation. Because of their determination and hard work, they can overcome all of the struggles. Nobody will be successful without trying hard. They have to dream high and work hard to accomplish their target. Today, the challenging situations are waiting from the childhood to the whole life in order that only highly-achievers might receive what they desired. From the side of student and officers, they can get scholar and job prospects if they are reliable and trying hard. Nevertheless, this idea may be depends on individual desires. In my opinion, working hard may be better than accepting bad situations because we can’t know what the future is and I strongly believe that it can be achieved our goals.

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people
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have to
 face with challenging occasions in their daily life. The ways You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
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see
 their problem are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 prefer to accept the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withposition
situation
 while others tend to try to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 rid of that.

On the one hand, accepting the right You use this word too often, consider replacing it withposition
situation
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 feel relax. They can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 mental problems unless they claim the worst You use this word too often, consider replacing it withposition
situation
 which won’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 their expectations.

They can’t know what tomorrow will bring to them. For instance
, a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 businessman can fall down into the poor You use this word too often, consider replacing it withposition
situation
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have to
 accept which You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
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get
 with low education background. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:notwithstanding
In spite of
 having few jobs to offer them, they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 take it for the basic needs.

On the other hand
, trying You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsolidstrongtough
hard
 in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
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people
 to achieve their goals. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
Many
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people
 are initially
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situation
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 of their determination and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsolidstrongtough
hard
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work
, they can overcome Consider using "all the".all the
all of the
 struggles. Nobody will be successful without trying You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsolidstrongtough
hard
. They This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 dream high and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsolidstrongtough
hard
 to accomplish their target. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
Today
, the challenging You use this word too often, consider replacing it withposition
situations
 are waiting from the childhood to the whole life in order that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
highly
-achievers might receive what they desired. From the side of student and officers, they can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 scholar and job prospects if they are reliable and trying This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
.

Nevertheless
, this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 may be Consider using the past participle "depended"?depended
depends
 on individual desires. In my opinion, working You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsolidstrongtough
hard
 may be better than accepting This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withposition
situations
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 we can’t know what the future is and I strongly
 believe that it can be achieved
 our goals. 