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Financial life is impacting many families during the pandemic, especially on low middle-class families. My family is also a low middle class in financial. My father's profession is affected by the pandemic. His income becomes low as compared to the last two years. It's a very critical situation to survive. My father is a diabetic patient, his one-fourth income spend on medicines and other expenses
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families. My family is
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in financial. My father's profession is
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critical situation to survive. My father is a diabetic patient, his one-fourth income spend on medicines and other
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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