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Meeting Recap- June 10th, 2021

Meeting Recap- June 10th, 2021 Vle2A
Thank you for attending the meeting today. In today’s meeting, we discussed the modification that is needed in the current finance dashboard. We have reviewed each card and identified which card needed to be modify and what will be the change required and prioritized and decided the phase-I and phase-II plan for recommended changes. Here are the details on the phase plan: Phase-I: Deadline (16-Jun-21) • Going forward, “Total Hub Cost”, ” Total Staff Cost (Dedicated)” and” Total Staff Cost (Project)” will be mapped into single category as “Total Staff Cost”. • For “GP% distribution heatmap by cost centers” instead of Gross Profit we should have %. • Oliver Cost Center & Inside Ideas Cost center will be removed from the dataset as they aren’t client for us. • Rename “Total Project Revenue” to “Total Gross Project Revenue” in cards where it has reference. • Net Revenue with GP% Margin Trend will have into two separate cards: 1. Card1: top 25 accounts based on net revenue sorted Largest to smallest 2. Card2: Except top25 others account will be present here. • The below cards will be removed from dashboard: 1. Last 12 Months Oliver GP% Distribution 2. Last 3 Months Cost Center with no identified owners Phase-II • Finance team will provide the split of “Total Hub Cost” either for Total Staff Cost (Dedicated)” or “Total Staff Cost (Project)”. Also, we missed one of the feedbacks from our yesterday’s call which was description of each cards to understand their meaning and context. Could you please provide the description of cards in an excel sheet. Let me know, in case if I’ve missed out anything or needs to be corrected in the above points.
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in the
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finance dashboard. We have reviewed each
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card
and identified which
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needed to be
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modify
and what will be the
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required and prioritized and decided the phase-I and phase-II plan for recommended
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changes
. Here are the
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on the phase plan:

Phase-I: Deadline (16-Jun-21)

• Going forward,
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“Total
Hub
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Cost”
,
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”
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Total
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Staff
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Cost
(Dedicated)” and”
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Total
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Staff
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Cost
(Project)” will
be mapped
into single category as
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“Total
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Staff
Cost”.

• For “
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GP%
distribution
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heatmap
by
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cost
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centers”
instead
of Gross Profit we should have %.

• Oliver
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Cost
Center & Inside
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Ideas
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center will
be removed
from the dataset as they aren’t client for us.

• Rename
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“Total
Project
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Revenue”
to
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“Total
Gross Project
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Revenue”
in
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cards
where it has reference.

• Net
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Revenue
with
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GP%
Margin Trend will have into two separate
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cards: 1
.
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: top 25 accounts based on net
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revenue
sorted Largest to smallest

2.
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: Except top25 others account will be present here.

• The below
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will
be removed
from dashboard:

1. Last 12 Months Oliver
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GP%
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Distribution


2. Last 3 Months
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Center with no identified owners

Phase-II

• Finance team will provide the split of
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“Total
Hub
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Cost”
either for
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Total
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Staff
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Cost
(Dedicated)” or
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“Total
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Staff
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Cost
(Project)”.

Also
, we missed one of the feedbacks from our yesterday’s call which was description of each
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to understand their meaning and context. Could you
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provide the description of
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cards
in an
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Let
me know, in case if I’ve missed out anything or needs to
be corrected
in the above points.
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IELTS essay Meeting Recap- June 10th, 2021

Essay
  American English
13 paragraphs
276 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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