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Many countries spend money to train the individual to participate the international sporting events some people say that money should be spent on public development instead do you agree or disagree?

Many countries spend money to train the individual to participate the international sporting events some people say that money should be spent on public development instead gYgna
Nowadays sports are important for Entairment. Government allocated majority of fund should be utilize on general people. I think sports are important for our overall development i justified my reason in following paragraph. Firstly Its important facts competition is natural in humans in daily life we compete to get jobs or the highest grade. Sports are safe form of competition. If we encourage scholar to participate in national level through government they can achive huge fame and name in all over the world m. For instance, sarita gaikvad belongs ti backward area in the Dang l. Due to administration support she able to earn stardom. Next if government support the games they compete with other country and we proud for them or accolade all over the world such as cricket in cricketers like virat kohli and mithali raj. in football game sunil chetri. . This are glad for our nations. Afterward development are also important like transportation, schools and hospitals because all people are pay taxes for it. So this is public purse in other words people pays tax not only for responsibility but they also expect facilitate to them. In closing, evolution is necessary and it is judicery duty to make sure to balance costs. Although, sports have been a vital part of our society.
Nowadays
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Entairment
.
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allocated
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majority of
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utilize
on general
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people
. I
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think
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sports
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important
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overall
development
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i
justified my reason in following paragraph.
Firstly
Its
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important
facts competition is natural in humans in daily life we compete to
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get
jobs or the highest grade.
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Sports
are safe form of competition. If we encourage scholar to participate in national level through
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government
they can
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achive
huge fame and name in all over the world m.
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,
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sarita
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gaikvad
belongs ti backward area in the Dang l. Due to administration support
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she
able to earn stardom.
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if
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government
support the games they compete with other
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country and
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we proud
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virat
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kohli
and
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mithali
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raj
.
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in
football game
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sunil
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chetri
.
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.
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glad for our nations. Afterward development are
also
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important
like transportation, schools and hospitals
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because
all
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people
are pay taxes for it.
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So
this is public purse
in other words
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people
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pays
tax not
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only
for responsibility
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they
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expect
facilitate to them. In closing, evolution is necessary and it is
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judicery
duty to
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make
sure to balance costs.
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Although
,
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sports
have been a vital part of our society.
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IELTS essay Many countries spend money to train the individual to participate the international sporting events some people say that money should be spent on public development instead

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216 words
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