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"True beauty is found not in the exceptional but in the commonplace. "Write an essay in which you take a position on the statement above. In developing and supporting your essay, consider instances in which the statement does and does not hold tr v.2

"True beauty is found not in the exceptional but in the commonplace. "Write an essay in which you take a position on the statement above. In developing and supporting your essay, consider instances in which the statement does and does not hold tr v. 2
Beauty, bu definition, is that which moves us or impacts us significantly. Some would argue that beauty is found everywhere, from the flowers to the stars. But others would state that true beauty is found only in rare, special instances. After weighing the evidence, it is certain that beauty is the province of the exceptional, not the common place. People are moved most by things that they rarely experience, not the things they experience every day. Those who would argue that true beauty is everywhere might point to the beauty of a flower, or the starlit night. These experiences are certainly common, but do they show that true beauty is commonplace? Flowers might be considered beautiful, but how often does a person top to look at or appreciate every flower? Flowers are so common that in many cases, they are ignored or viewed as nothing special. However, on those rare occasions - exceptional occasions, one might say - when we want to commemorate an event or express emotion, we notice the beauty of flowers. Thus, it is not the commonplace flower that strikes us as beautiful, but the exceptional situations themselves that move us to appreciate the flower. Now consider the exceptional. Leonardo da Vinci' s Mona Lisa is surely one of the most exceptional, and beautiful, paintings ever created. Few people who view the painting are not moved by the sheer beauty of it, and the Mona Lisa is instantly recognized as a masterpiece of art. Any yet, there have been literally millions of paintings produced in human history. Is every single one of the beautiful? Does every one of those paintings have the impact that da Vinci' s does? Of course not. In order to find beauty, we must separate the exceptional cases from the common ones. True beauty is such because it stands out from the masses of the average and pedestrian. Like da Vinci' s Mona Lisa, the cathedral of Notre Dame in Paris is an exceptional, and exceptionally beautiful, object. Churches and cathedrals line the streets of most major cities in Western Europe, but few possess the renown of Notre Dame, one of the most beautiful cathedrals in the world. Compared to a common church or cathedral, Notre Dame is truly awe-inspiring; Victor Hugo used the building as the backdrop for his magnificent book The Hunchback of Notre Dame and thousands of tourists travel untold miles to view the cathedral. That sort of beauty is not possessed by just anu church on the corner. In conclusion, it' s clear that true beauty is found not in the commonplace, but in the exceptional. The Mona Lisa sand Notre Dame Cathedral are both exceptional examples of fairly commonplace things and it is these exceptions that are noted as truly beautiful. If anything, the commonplace serves only as a contrast so that we can understand what true beauty really is.
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Beauty
,
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bu
definition, is that which
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moves
us or impacts us
significantly
.
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Some
would argue that
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beauty
is found
everywhere, from the
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flowers
to the stars.
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But
others would state that
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true
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beauty
is found
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only
in rare, special instances. After weighing the evidence, it is certain that
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beauty
is the province of the
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exceptional
, not the
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common
place.
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People
are
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moved
most by things that they rarely experience, not the things they experience every day.

Those who would argue that
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true
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beauty
is everywhere might point to the
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beauty
of a
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flower
, or the starlit night. These experiences are
certainly
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common
,
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but
do they
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show
that
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true
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beauty
is
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commonplace
?
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Flowers
might
be considered
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beautiful
,
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but
how
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often
does a person top to look at or appreciate every
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flower
?
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are
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so
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common
that in
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many
cases, they are
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ignored
or viewed as nothing special.
However
, on those rare occasions
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-
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exceptional
occasions, one might say
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-
when we want to commemorate an
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event
or express emotion, we notice the
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beauty
of
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flowers
.
Thus
, it is not the
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commonplace
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flower
that strikes us as
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beautiful
,
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but
the
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exceptional
situations themselves that
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move
us to appreciate the flower.

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Now
consider the
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exceptional
. Leonardo
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da
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Vinci&
#039; s Mona Lisa is
surely
one of the most
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exceptional
, and
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beautiful
,
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paintings
ever created. Few
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people
who view the
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painting
are not
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moved
by the sheer
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beauty
of it, and the Mona Lisa is
instantly
recognized as a masterpiece of art. Any
yet
, there have been
literally
millions of
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paintings
produced in human history. Is every single one of the
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beautiful
? Does every one of those
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paintings
have the impact that
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da
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Vinci&
#039; s does?
Of course
not. In order to find
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beauty
, we
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must
separate the
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exceptional
cases from the
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common
ones.
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True
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beauty
is such
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because
it stands out from the masses of the average and pedestrian.

Like
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da
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Vinci&
#039; s Mona Lisa, the cathedral of Notre Dame in Paris is an
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exceptional
, and
exceptionally
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beautiful
, object. Churches and cathedrals line the streets of most major cities in Western Europe,
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but
few possess the renown of Notre Dame, one of the most
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beautiful
cathedrals in the world. Compared to a
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common
church or cathedral, Notre Dame is
truly
awe-inspiring; Victor Hugo
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used
the building as the backdrop for his magnificent book The Hunchback of Notre Dame and thousands of tourists travel untold miles to view the cathedral. That sort of
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beauty
is not possessed by
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just
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anu
church on the corner.

In conclusion
,
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#039; s
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clear
that
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true
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beauty
is found
not in the
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commonplace
,
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but
in the
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exceptional
. The Mona Lisa sand Notre Dame Cathedral are both
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exceptional
examples of
fairly
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commonplace
things and it is these exceptions that
are noted
as
truly
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beautiful
. If anything, the
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commonplace
serves
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only
as a contrast
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so
that we can understand what
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true
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beauty
really
is.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
57Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Mistakes

IELTS essay "True beauty is found not in the exceptional but in the commonplace. "Write an essay in which you take a position on the statement above. In developing and supporting your essay, consider instances in which the statement does and does not hold tr v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
482 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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