Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

travelling to thiland with my friend

travelling to thiland with my friend m5l8n

Me and my friend Sara traveled to a fabulous and wilderness country Thailand! that before this I haven’t been to there. it is located in far east with east Asian eyed people. thai people are the most hospitable and passionate that I’ve ever seen. the weather was inpredictible, we were sitting on the stair of a monk(temple)accidentally it began to rain. one night we got into a party in downtown in cramped apartment, despite cramped location, most of the people were overindulged in drinking alchohol and smoking weed. it was disgusting I wish I wouldn’t have accepted my friend suggestion to attend that party. we had left the party soon that our friends called us that police arrested us. police told them they will be stayed in jail and the will be fined for this party in pandemic. They have been to jail for 6 3 month until now. I’m thinking about this story that I have been working in water and wastewater company but my friends are still in jail and they wouldn’t be accepted in governmental company as a clerk because of this negative aspect of arresting. and I’m thinking to immigration these days If every thing goes well at the end of 2022 I will have left the country and I will be raising my children there. I regret IF my friend hadn’t gone to that part, they would have had normal life like me. If I were in their shoes, I wouldn’nt stay late in that strange party.

When referring to yourself and somebody else, put their name first. Also check whether the nominative form "I" is required here.I
Me
 and my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleagueacquaintancebuddyassociatecompanionroommate
friend
 Sara traveled to a fabulous and wilderness country Thailand! This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThat
that
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 this I haven’t been to there. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
is located
 in far east with east Asian eyed This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThai
thai
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are the most hospitable and passionate that I’ve ever This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 weather was Possible spelling mistake found.unpredictable
inpredictible
, we were sitting on the stair of a monk(temple)accidentally
 it began to rain. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOne
one
 night we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 into a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 in downtown in cramped apartment, despite cramped location, most of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
were overindulged
 in drinking Possible spelling mistake found.alcohol
alchohol
 and smoking weed. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
 was disgusting I wish I wouldn’t have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
accepted
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleagueacquaintancebuddyassociatecompanionroommate
friend
 suggestion to attend that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWe
we
 had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 that our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleagueacquaintancebuddyassociatecompanionroommate
friends
 called us that police arrested us. police This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 them they will be stayed
 in jail and Did you mean "they", "that" or "there"?theythatthere
the
 will be fined
 for this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 in pandemic.

They have been to jail for 6 3 Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: "months".months
month
 until This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. I’m thinking about this story that I have been working in water and wastewater This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleagueacquaintancebuddyassociatecompanionroommate
friends
 are still
 in Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).jail, and
jail and
 they wouldn’t be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
accepted
 in governmental This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 as a clerk because of this
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 aspect of arresting. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAnd
and
 I’m thinking to immigration these days If every thing goes well at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of 2022 I will have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 the country and I will be raising my children there. I regret IF my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleagueacquaintancebuddyassociatecompanionroommate
friend
 hadn’t gone to that part, they would have had normal life like me. If I were in their shoes, I Did you mean "wouldn’t"?wouldn’t
wouldn’
Possible spelling mistake found.NTatitnotnoSt
nt
 stay late in that strange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
. 