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Travelling to reset myself

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I am travelling to Sapa on 3 May. The train going to Sapa starts at 7. 30 p. m on 2 May. I've just finished my work, I feel so exhausted. This is the reason, I am thinking about the plan that I reset myself. Oh sorry, I don't remember to introduce myself. My name is Tu Anh. I am a personnel of a FPT company. The work of the company is extremely busy. Every day, I work from 8a. m to 5p. m, until Saturday and Sunday. I've worked there for 5 years and I feel depressed about the work. I'll take a break for a trip I planned.
I am travelling to
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Sapa
on 3 May. The train going to
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Sapa
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at 7. 30 p. m on 2 May. I've
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finished my
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, I feel
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exhausted. This is the reason, I am thinking about the plan that I reset myself. Oh sorry, I don't remember to introduce myself. My name is Tu
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. I am a personnel of
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FPT
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. The
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of the
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from 8a.
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to 5p.
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, until Saturday and Sunday. I've worked there for 5 years and I feel depressed about the
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. I'll take a break for a trip I planned.
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IELTS essay Travelling to reset myself

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
110 words
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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