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Task 10. Technology vs Humans

Task 10. Technology vs Humans x8wJa

We live in a complex epoch, technology has changed the way we interacted with people, now we are able to communicate with persons who we not see long time ago or meet someone around the world, due the pandemic we manage the way we get information about the virus, but there are some time spaces in which humans are involved face to face with other. It is also known that technology improves our life in an essential way, not only in communication but also in jobs. Mothers who want to sell something can use applications, or more important, we use technology for medical purposes. Lately technology has been seen as a vital part of our life and how certain aspects of it have been improved, it also cannot be denied that more and more people are dependent on this. Still, human beings at the moment are capable of using and manipulating this technology. On the other hand, it is distressing to know that technology advances faster than we think, people lose their jobs because of technology, workers are replaced by appliances, sometimes this improves performance and increases factory output. On the contrary, there are occasions and jobs where a machine cannot replace the human being, because it lacks “simple” abilities that are not taken into account. Personally I believe that technology is necessary, despite removing some jobs it is also important to understand that we human beings must update our skills as well as improve the ones we already have to make better use of them. Machines still depend on someone to repair, configure, and build them.

We This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in a complex epoch, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 the way we interacted with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 we are able to communicate with persons who we not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 long time ago or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 someone around the world, due the pandemic we manage the way we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 information about the virus, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time spaces in which You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodylifemortalcharacterindividualchild
humans
are involved
 face to face with other.

It is also
 known that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorates
improves
 our life Consider replacing "in an essential way" with the adverb for "essential"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in an essential way
, not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 in communication This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
jobs
. Mothers who want to sell something can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 applications, or more This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
, we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 for medical purposes. Lately You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 as a vital part of our life and how certain aspects of it have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
, it also
 cannot be denied
 that more and more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are dependent on this. Still
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpersonalanimalmortal
human
 beings at the moment are capable of using and manipulating this technology.

On the other hand
, it is distressing to know that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 advances faster than we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 lose their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
jobs
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
, workers are replaced
 by appliances, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorates
improves
 performance and increases factory output. On the contrary
, there are occasions and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
jobs
 where a machine cannot replace the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpersonalanimalmortal
human
 being, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it lacks “simple” abilities that are not taken into account.

Personally
 I believe that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 is necessary, despite removing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
jobs
 it is also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 to understand that we You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpersonalanimalmortal
human
 beings This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 update our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
as well
 as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 the ones we already This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 better This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of them. Machines still
 depend on someone to repair, configure, and build them. 