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In olden days people used to travel long distance to there work place but now they are Working from home and now a days technology plays an important role in our daily lives and people are attached to this gadgets more than there personal lives. they are some benefits here for working form home people can spend more of the time with the loved once and family members, by removing the travailing time they can use that time for there personal health and saving there gas money. Job providers like IT industry's are also on a beneficial side saving on power consummation, beverages and snakes and maintains charges are added to there pocket. company's are allowing there employee to work from home as they productivity increased rapidly, employee is giving more than expected ever compared to olden time saving there time and energy on traveling.

In olden days This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to travel long distance to there work place This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 they are Working from home and Did you mean "nowadays"?nowadays
now a days
 technology plays an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 role in our daily This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
are attached
 to Did you mean "these"?these
this
 gadgets more than there personal This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThey
they
 are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 benefits here for working form home This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 can spend more of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiredadored
loved
 once and family members, by removing the travailing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 they can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 for there personal health and saving there gas money.

Job providers like IT Consider using the plural form here: "industrys".industrys
industry's
 are also
 on a beneficial side saving on power consummation, beverages and snakes and maintains charges are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to there pocket.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCompany
company
's are allowing there employee to work from home as Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'they'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
they productivity
 increased rapidly
, employee is giving more than This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 ever compared to olden You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 saving there You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 and energy on traveling. 