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Traveling in distant countries

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In our modern life traveling in distant so widespread and set the trend, several people is certain about it but some not sure. While it has more beneficial influence. It is clear that tourism has changed in last 5 years the way much invaluable. The clearest example for that people have big confident to travel by country to country. The main point that the countries can exchange their culture and arts. Most of tourists are crazy about country's art and several part of them want keep in touch with various native people. By that way countries can make their art, tradition in the public eye. I would agree that the touristic companies have mostly improved. By being common principal benefit is that countries constructing more hotels and creating vacancies in my view it is one of the best tactics to develop countries' finance. For instance around the globe building hotels increased as much as in recent years. Another way that the countries having currencies by tourists it is one of the best aid to country. In my conclusion is therefore that being common of tourists factual has more benefits than harm and l think most countries should develop their touristic company.

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but
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some
 not sure. “While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
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clear
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. The main point that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 can exchange their culture and arts. After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ("Most of the tourists") or simply say "Most tourists".Most of the touristsMost tourists
Most of tourists
 are crazy about country's art and Possible agreement error. The noun part seems to be countable; consider using: "several parts".several parts
several part
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keep
 in touch with various native This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. By that way You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 their art, tradition in the public eye.

I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 that the touristic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 have mostly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
. By being common principal benefit is that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 constructing more hotels and creating vacancies in my view it is one of the best tactics to develop countries' finance. For instance
 around the globe building hotels increased as much as in recent years. Another way that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 having currencies by tourists it is one of the best aid to country.

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 that being common of tourists factual has more benefits than harm and l This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
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countries
 should develop their touristic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
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