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Transport Percentage among young people for different countries

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Car was the most popular type of transport in all countries, except for Germany. In Great Britain and USA, there are big differences between percentages of people who choose some kind of transport. In Germany, percentages of people who choose car and bicycle are roughly the same. In France, percentages of people who choose motorcycle and bicycle are nearly equal. Motorcycle was the least popular type of transport in all countries, except for the USA. Overall, car is the most chosen transport, bicycle is on the second place and motorcycle is the least chosen transport.
Car was the most popular type of
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transport
in all countries,
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except for
Germany.

In Great Britain and USA, there are
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big
differences between percentages of
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people
who choose
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some
kind of transport.

In Germany, percentages of
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people
who choose car and bicycle are roughly the same.

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In
France, percentages of
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people
who choose motorcycle and bicycle are
nearly
equal.

Motorcycle was the least popular type of
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transport
in all countries,
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except for
the USA.

Overall
, car is the most chosen
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transport
, bicycle is on the second place and motorcycle is the least chosen
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transport
.
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IELTS essay Transport Percentage among young people for different countries

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
95 words
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