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Due to advancement in technology, it is possible to work from home. Are you agree or disagree with the statement.

Due to advancement in technology, it is possible to work from home. Are you agree or disagree with the statement. VE0p6
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in one way or other and it plays a crucial role in human life. In this day and age
however
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agree
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technology
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important
for us it is possible to work from home amplify, during pandemic all the business of locked everything
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Sectra
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people
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started
online business for and money during pandemic that’s why I
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agree
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is the source of all money for two persons of four
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to earn
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money and
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IELTS essay Due to advancement in technology, it is possible to work from home. Are you agree or disagree with the statement.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
171 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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