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Transistor radio should be prohibited in public places

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Voice is one of the most unpleasant features of modern life. Certainly, you see people who drive fifty miles into the country and find a quiet spot of earth then begin to wash their cars. If you are attacked with crocodile or vicious piranha, don't be surprised if you hear a cheering crowd from a transistor radio that people use. They turn on their transistor radio and if one person protests then they punch in his nose or completely ignore him. And then turn up louder than ever before. If you go to the shop and sing loud, certainly a policeman arrests you. Nevertheless, in the jungle or beach, you can shout loud, no one turns his head. Every year governments of all over the world gather and try to reduce noise. They measured traffic sounds and level of tolerance recorded then do an elaborate test about how the community adjust itself with this voice. Hence interfere with other's pleasure should be a crime.

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ignore
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governments
 of all over the world gather and try to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 noise. They measured traffic sounds and level of tolerance recorded then do an elaborate This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
 about how the community adjust itself with this voice. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Hence,
Hence
 interfere with other's pleasure should be a crime. 