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Children should learn in a competitive environment

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Children should learn in a competitive environment. When done right, competition can help children develop skills they will need for a lifetime. First skill is unique work, maintenance and will to strive. For example, when a child in a class has a lot of friends who are better than him, he will learn how to improve each day so that you progress faster in the class. In addition, children will learn to be important and promote their own values. In a painting environment, children will learn how to develop their strengths to stand out from the crowd, thus having more opportunities for study and later a job.
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IELTS essay Children should learn in a competitive environment

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
107 words
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